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Some Here Unloved

What I want taken fate dealt to me a taste of then took it away like a child from its mother, this anguish pitted so deep. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Audrey Haick

Date: 8/19/2013 12:03:00 AM

Hi Harry... so good to see you. Thanks for the visit... yes, life has its way of throwing us curves but keep hope alive, my friend. Always, Annalise

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/18/2013 7:34:00 AM

Felt your anguish...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2013 2:58:00 PM

Rereading this lovely one, Harry. Did you get a new Avatar? I wish they were easier to see them!

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 8/12/2013 2:23:00 AM

So sorry if this is true of your own life, so sad a touching a write. Heartfelt feeling indeed. My heart goes out...

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/11/2013 7:28:00 AM

Harry, you captured that feeling so perfectly in this write of yours ;) hope you are doing okay.. tc Wilma

Donna Jones

Date: 8/9/2013 7:29:00 AM

Hi Harry...pain leaves heaviness to carry always in our hearts...you captured that here...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2013 10:49:00 AM

I can feel the pain of loss in this one..I am glad that I picked it out to read..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/5/2013 8:36:00 PM

Hi Harry; A few words can say a lot. fate delt then took it away. Smile - tomorrow is a new day. I have not seen you around much. I hope you are doing good...... Lucilla

April Gabriella

Date: 8/4/2013 5:40:00 PM

Wow these words are so powerful, they pierce me deeply. Excellent write.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/4/2013 2:08:00 AM

Harry....had to read this one again...Who said fate had to have the upper hand???? Never! Take it back!!!! Don't give up without a fight!!!! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2013 1:31:00 AM

a poem about anguish very well done, Harry. A pleasure seeing you posting this weekend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2013 1:39:00 PM

with such depth, i must say this draws me in, harry... broodlingly beautiful!..:) huggs

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/3/2013 1:05:00 PM

Very sad poem, my sweet friend. A great passion I see here in this poem. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/3/2013 11:32:00 AM

Harry? This is so so sad and heart wrenching....Beautiful in every way...thanks for visiting. Hope all is well with you! Hugs