Dion Bess Poet Rhyme

Some Gangster Shhh

guess what I'mma bust back with a fully loaded gloc/

pistol so hot that the devil told that he want his flames back// 

your boy's the grim ripper and i'm more sicker than an tracks/

spit tin out aids cuz i burn mc each time i hop up pon the track//

and in this game ya don't want beef with me cause I'm just that nigga/

you have a gun oh well but do have the heart to pull the trigga//

cause my bullets is like crack because it's put holes in your brain/

so blank what you heard cause my whole crew is insane//

 i'm down for my nation like obama said it's time for a change/

i live with no emotion my heart is stuck in this damn cage//

and lets make it clear your block ain't hot it's colder than the ice age/

i got old money i was on the block in the stone age//

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Debbie Guzzi July 2, 2009 at 6:04 PM Ok you're a "hoodlum?" you rap? Why the / and the // & tell an old lady what "i burn mc " means? And why call yourself a "nigga" Life & other nasty folk dump on us enough without dumping on ourselves, yes? You reinforce yourown demise, why? I too love President Obama ..the idea of him..that this is the America I WANT where any hardworking person can rise. Fret..I don't get the point of this verse..it may be a more than adequate verse but WHY say it? Light & Love

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 17, 2009 at 2:57 PM pistol so hot that the devil told that he want his flames back-->I actually like this one!Can i pretty much put it on my p.m?With you as the Publisher ofcourse!Youve gatta take credit.Holla back:)

Jay Loveless June 9, 2009 at 9:31 AM Damn Boy. You Got Heart Though. Only Fools Cant See Dat. Hit Me Up With Some Rymes. Show Me What You Got. I Write Up Some Raps Every Now And Then. Peace My Ninjah. Boo