Raven Howell Poet Rhyme

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Some Days

Some days I want to stay in bed,
Let flowery thoughts run through my head.
Some days I like to kick off shoes,
Run through our garden as I choose.
Until it’s time to work, I play,
And gift the world my best bouquet.

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Anne E Sangster - K February 25, 2022 at 5:32 PM Beautifully happy words Raven and great rhyming too! Cheers Anne :-)

Gordon Mcconnell February 25, 2022 at 11:06 AM Lovely rhyme and flow Raven, a really enjoyable piece indeed. Blessings from Scotland, Gordon

Paulette Calasibetta February 25, 2022 at 10:39 AM You weave a beautiful tapestry that also sings. Lovely. :)Paulette

Jo Chamberlain February 25, 2022 at 9:36 AM I love this short, fun poem. With great imagery.

Richard Morris February 25, 2022 at 9:32 AM I love to see somebody else writing in rhyme. And a young person, to boot. Then add that the poems not only flow, but "show" and not "tell" bring an even better emotional feel to the poetry. Good job.

Chris Green February 25, 2022 at 9:29 AM A wonderful happy poem

Chris Green February 25, 2022 at 9:28 AM A wonderful happy poem

Kim Rodrigues January 10, 2022 at 12:55 PM I just read one of your lovely poems from the anthology…was above mine on page 227. There is a lot of nice things…let flowery thoughts run through my head, kick off shoes. Beautiful work, Raven!

Jan Allison October 18, 2021 at 1:28 PM some days I want to read fab poems like these, please write lots more I'll plead and plead:-) an absolute gem from start to finish, a HUGE fave:-) hugs jan xx