Some Days

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Some days I want to stay in bed, Let flowery thoughts run through my head. Some days I like to kick off shoes, Run through our garden as I choose. Until it’s time to work, I play, And gift the world my best bouquet.

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 2/25/2022 5:32:00 PM

Beautifully happy words Raven and great rhyming too! Cheers Anne :-)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/25/2022 11:06:00 AM

Lovely rhyme and flow Raven, a really enjoyable piece indeed. Blessings from Scotland, Gordon

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/25/2022 10:39:00 AM

You weave a beautiful tapestry that also sings. Lovely. :)Paulette

Joanna Feltham

Date: 2/25/2022 9:36:00 AM

I love this short, fun poem. With great imagery.

Richard Morris

Date: 2/25/2022 9:32:00 AM

I love to see somebody else writing in rhyme. And a young person, to boot. Then add that the poems not only flow, but "show" and not "tell" bring an even better emotional feel to the poetry. Good job.

Chris Green

Date: 2/25/2022 9:29:00 AM

A wonderful happy poem

Chris Green

Date: 2/25/2022 9:28:00 AM

A wonderful happy poem

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/10/2022 12:55:00 PM

I just read one of your lovely poems from the anthology…was above mine on page 227. There is a lot of nice things…let flowery thoughts run through my head, kick off shoes. Beautiful work, Raven!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2021 1:28:00 PM

some days I want to read fab poems like these, please write lots more I'll plead and plead:-) an absolute gem from start to finish, a HUGE fave:-) hugs jan xx