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Some Days - Other Days

SOME DAYS like a little stream life flows softly and with ease all dancing eddies OTHER DAYS into opaque mud boulders press with sharp edges only breathe through crevice

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Date: 4/24/2010 7:17:00 PM
What a creative and insightful poem. Good use of imagery. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/24/2010 2:17:00 PM
TRUE, SOME DAYS THINGS GO SMOOTH AND OTHERS ARE JUST BLAHH, ENJOYED, THANK YOU
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Date: 4/24/2010 12:48:00 PM
Excellent comparison....in this one ....That is so true to life..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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