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Some Day

Someday when I leave this place, To walk another land, I'll gladly cast my soul aside, To please the master's hand. Earth is here to offer penance To fools born into innocence. As they give up their gift of freedom To serve in tense ambivalence. I refuse to serve that master. No pious shackles burden me... I wander with a pristine heart, In all places I choose to be. written 08.27.2016

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Date: 8/29/2016 2:22:00 PM
I think this is absolutely wonderful - I loved the power in each line and the overall feel. Something in my soul concurs with your poem. To me, this is a 7 and a much better write than some receiving bunches of comments - some things make no sense ... CayCay
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/29/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words CayCay. I appreciate your interest in my work and also your time to comment, (constructive criticism is welcomed as well). ...Fran

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