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Some Day

some day I will disappear like a rock under the sea lost, beneath all that debris will you think of me ?

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Pratap Roy

Date: 9/19/2021 1:02:00 AM

Very good poetic expression. Liked the flow. God bless you.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/4/2021 9:06:00 PM

I do not think we ever truly disappear, some vital part of our essence remains, however intangible...Delice

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/4/2021 9:34:00 AM

Mystic Rose Rose, No one really disappears as long as you leave enough memories. Like breadcrumbs they'll find their way back to your heart. -Richard

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/1/2021 2:48:00 PM

So poignant, you inspire so much with just a few words~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/1/2021 11:27:00 AM

Yes. I will think of you! God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina

Mohamed Omar

Date: 9/1/2021 10:01:00 AM

Awesome poem.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/1/2021 1:09:00 AM

How can I ever forget you? Hugs.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/31/2021 3:34:00 PM

Of course, and always! A moment that speaks to us-- and we wonder! Well done, Vienna.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/31/2021 6:16:00 PM

Thank you it was a moment that came to me this morning while walking the beach Life is so precious, we hang on more tightly as the years go by, Thanks for taking time to comment :)