Some Day

some day I will disappear like a rock under the sea lost, beneath all that debris will you think of me ?
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Roy Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 1:02 AM
Very good poetic expression. Liked the flow. God bless you.
Skelly Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:06 PM
I do not think we ever truly disappear, some vital part of our essence remains, however intangible...Delice
Theraven Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Mystic Rose Rose, No one really disappears as long as you leave enough memories. Like breadcrumbs they'll find their way back to your heart. -Richard
Faulkner Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:48 PM
So poignant, you inspire so much with just a few words~
Mcintosh Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Yes. I will think of you! God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina
Omar Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Awesome poem.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 1:09 AM
How can I ever forget you? Hugs.
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Of course, and always! A moment that speaks to us-- and we wonder! Well done, Vienna.
Rose  Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Thank you it was a moment that came to me this morning while walking the beach Life is so precious, we hang on more tightly as the years go by, Thanks for taking time to comment :)
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