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Somdeday, Maybe

How weird this could be That one would be as important as a tree That two could be a family That many can sing so joyfully Summer is when we're free Spring is so blissful to see Winter is where everyone flee Fall is another word for trustworthy Open your eyes, tell me what you see Listen carefully there's a buzzing bee Oh! Smell that apple fresh from the tree Don't forget to savor that delicious delicacy Lastly, feel every moment as your greatest legacy

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Date: 12/21/2020 9:01:00 AM
Heartfelt and I enjoyed the tone of your voice in this piece.
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Louie Garcia
Date: 12/21/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Rob! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/21/2020 8:58:00 AM
What is Somdeday?
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Louie Garcia
Date: 12/21/2020 3:50:00 PM
I hope this won't sound stupid hehe. But I could not decide if its someday, one day, or today. So I got 3 words of "day", and decided to try and combine them.

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