Somber Is the Color of the Day

Somber is the color of the day...
Window glass distorts the view, of the dreary afternoon
Prisms of light cavorting outside, are reflected from the dew
and rainbows are splashed, from an old pewter lamp 
       as if to divert me of my mood

While quietly, I sit, and ponder it all, my pen is close, my chin in hand
Pinned back, my strands, a sweater, old, is pulled around the chill
 woven in colors, of various yarns, as varied as thoughts that take me away

My mind is lost in a wakened dream
While trees are tossed about in winter wind, 
               and leaves lay dead beneath the snowy mounds
                 a fire glows, and a storm now keeps me bound

One shard of light from a neighbor's home
       across the hill, a distant mile
           The dimness in a room from winter sighs...
                then something sparks a word ...a line, .. a verse, ... a lullaby ...

The day is sadder than the words I had found...
        so somber is the day that keeps me bound

I hide away this moment....a cup of tea, a Golden Lab for company..
One peek beyond the distant hill, a touch of sun
A glimpse of mountain, pastures deep, my dog that sleeps...

A momentary chance to free my soul
In just a brief, but deep departure from the ordinary...
I explore my thoughts, search my heart, wonder what this day will bring...
    I watched old memories, long kept cold, ...unfold as if a dream
      Unsort, relive, those worlds untold.... 
            Exploring new words, I now have found
      
Stumbling through my mind,  unintended
   Watching the words tumble as if unattended...
      Unfolding, exploding, and falling in chaos
             Paying no mind to the reader's conception
                   Cleansing, pleasing, as my soul fits the pieces...
       
                     Beneficial.... to the reader...will it matter? Who knows?...
                       But a satisfying journey traveled and found
                           by myself....and for myself, ....as the one who's  creating...

     Looking out from blurry windows...a dark day continues ...
             on a somber colored day, that kept me bound.....



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Jones Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 8:57 PM
You seem a contented person too Carrie...a lovely poem...
Guzzi Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 2:45 PM
You know you have succeeded as a person when you do enjoy your own company, you never disappoint Carrie! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 11:21 PM
as a bio of your thought processes and yourself as a poetess, this is truly an exceptional poem and I'd expect nothing less. Congrats on a very well deserved win!
Guzzi Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 6:10 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy Christmas Eve. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 12:07 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Carrie
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 9:23 PM
You are so talented, congratulations!
Dillard Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 6:22 PM
Carrie, As I have said, somedays, are just that way, you just gotta tell it like it is. And it makes nice poetry in your minds eye. Congratulations and Merry Christmas!
Peterson Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 2:23 PM
I can't tell you absorbing this poem was for me. You have put in words the progression of thoughts, feelings and ideas that often swarm in disarray within my mind and then collide. I'm keeping this one for a long, long time. Congratulations on your win.
Peterson Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 2:23 PM
I can't tell you absorbing this poem was for me. You have put in words the progression of thoughts, feelings and ideas that often swarm in disarray within my mind and then collide. I'm keeping this one for a long, long time. Congratulations on your win.
Phookan Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Congrats Carrie on your fabulous win! Loved this beautifully crafted piece of writing.Thank you so much for your participation. huggs...G
A   Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 9:26 PM
Carrie, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
Oyewole Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win... I actually enjoy reading your piece... well done.
Dillard Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:43 AM
Carrie, Some days are just that way, but are worthy to record and share in this very manner. RAY
Eastman Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:13 AM
A very interesting write that seems to at times reflect us all... in your work. Congratulations on the win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this mystic piece of your soul's reflections. Beautifully written Carrie.
Sister Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 6:04 PM
This imagery is so touching, puts me siting right there with you. J.
Johnson Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 4:45 PM
Your free verse is so beautiful one forgets it is unrhymed. Lovely. No wonder it is one of Andrea's favorites. Love, joyce
Ober Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 4:24 PM
Breathtaking, Carrie, and flawlessly penned. Congrats!
May Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 1:34 PM
great write and win...congrats
Hendricks Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 12:19 PM
Wow!! I like, Carrie. Congratulations on your win, my friend. Nice one. :)
Gasun Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear friend Carrie! This is absolutely great and I enjoyed reading it tonight. I love it so much as well. Thanks a lot for sharing. love and big hugs, Leonora
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:35 AM
many congratulations on your double win Carrie , first as a fave and now this xx
Bauer Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:08 AM
wow! you've painted such a vivid mood in this poem that i could picture exactly every single thing you've described and the way each one made you feel. very well done!
Brown Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Carrie. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 6:05 PM
This is a hansome one Carrie, congratulations on the way to second round. Agape, Moses
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