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Somber Air

Wind swifts across the leaves that fall in the arid ground Rain drops falls from the sky as bewailing your demise Dark clouds gloom the firmament evoking a somber air A red flower bud blooms as a great promise of a new life Nayda Ivette 12-12-2015

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Date: 12/12/2015 9:16:00 PM
Such an ominous setting and then a burst of color from a budded red flower. Very nice contrast, Nayda. Well written.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 12/12/2015 9:23:00 PM
Thank you very much for your feedback Lin. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 12/12/2015 8:59:00 PM
Very vivid details!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 12/12/2015 9:22:00 PM
Thank you very much for visiting my poem Hannah.

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