Somber Air

Wind swifts across the leaves that fall in the arid ground
Rain drops falls from the sky as bewailing your demise 
Dark clouds gloom the firmament evoking a somber air
A red flower bud blooms as a great promise of a new life










Nayda Ivette
12-12-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lane Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 9:16 PM
Such an ominous setting and then a burst of color from a budded red flower. Very nice contrast, Nayda. Well written.
Negron Flores Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Thank you very much for your feedback Lin. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
Pearl Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:59 PM
Very vivid details!
Negron Flores Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 9:22 PM
Thank you very much for visiting my poem Hannah.
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