Soma Sonnet: Posthumous Soliloquy

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*Image of Popular DJ Avicii (cutting himself & bled out) AUDIO: from the film Gladiator, "Now We Are Free" "Sometimes in life, we're just not cut out for it, hoping people see the point," by Poet Soma Sonnet: Posthumous Soliloquy As the blade search for the life of me, The pain glides the blade with certainty, Deeper the journey as my body writhe, The agony lingers as I am denied relief, ~~now, let me be free Thoughts mingle with the blood juice, The wealth of data drowns and mutes, Deliverer plunge to my conviction, Released of a wretched disposition, ~~now, let me be free Partakes in the realm of the soulless, Contorted body claim to Earthiness, Life teems, trilled sound, grassy green, central, city's heart beats onward, minus a soul. ~~now, let me be free Had all of it, all I forfeit, help me, Your will is thy will now, let me be free 2022 August 17 Soma Sonnet: Posthumous Soliloquy *1st Place* Inner conflict ~~Unseeking Seeker: Judged 2022 August 20

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Date: 8/22/2022 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Date: 8/22/2022 3:17:00 PM
Thanks again, Paula, didn't get the notice, but c'est la vie, mon amie, Aloha~William
Date: 8/20/2022 7:14:00 AM
Intriguing and, as someone else said, chilling... stunning, thought provoking, mystery.... God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/20/2022 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Gina, tis be a poignant tale wove--frees my friend, Aloha~William
Date: 8/20/2022 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations! on your top win. Emphasis of "let me be free" at the end of each verse, defines the pain and agony. Rasitha
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Date: 8/20/2022 8:51:00 AM
The fragility so fleeting, Rasitha, blessings indeed, Aloha~William
Date: 8/17/2022 5:33:00 PM
Very good poem, so chilling! Elizabeth
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Date: 8/17/2022 5:43:00 PM
With deepest regards, Elizabeth, Aloha~William
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