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Soluble

soothing embers’ thirst she pours out her flaming heart dry tears shed her fear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/20/2018 6:30:00 PM
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An absolutely beautiful haiku Kai. The imagery is rich, deep and poetically superb. Full of passionate emotion! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/7/2018 8:36:00 PM
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Gosh you are so good at these Kai. Never fails to baffle me how you poets manage to convey such imagery in three short lines. Brilliant....Maria
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/8/2018 3:23:00 AM
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Hi Maria. The three line thing helps, because my stuff gets too complex with the long format. Many wishes and a Happy Day, Kai
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2018 1:27:00 PM
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- Beautiful done, Kai - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/8/2018 3:22:00 AM
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Thank you Sunshine Smile. I appreciate that. Kai

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