Sol's Gilded Chariot

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Tetractys
Invented by Ray Stebbing, it is a 5 line poem with the 1st line having one syllable, the 2nd line two syllables, the 3rd line three syllables, the 4th line four syllables and the 5th line 10 syllables (1,2,3,4, 10) You may also(10,4,3,2,1) or a double Tetractys (1,2,3,4,10, 10,4,3,2,1)

Sol's
gilded
chariot 
slowly ascends
over fields of worshiping sunflowers
in a sky of burnt almond and orange
as morning light
directs their 
loving
gaze


(Double Tetractys)


09-24-2020
Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2020 3:44:00 AM

Creative winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/12/2020 6:48:00 AM

Thanks Sara, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2020 6:07:00 PM

Emile, your beautiful imagery delights the senses and paints an inspiring poetic picture. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2020 8:13:00 AM

Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2020 2:38:00 PM

Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Emile. I love the theme in your,"Sol's Gilded Chariot'', it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2020 8:13:00 AM

Thanks Eve, I appreciate the placement and you encouraging comments my friend, Emile.