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Solomon Songs


~Wisdom seeks virgins,
wise virgins therefore love Him
the Rose of Sharon,
the beloved Lily,
Beloved is mine, I am his,
I swoon of His love~

Choka 5,7,5,5,7,5

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Sara's "Song Of Solomon" contest John. Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/10/2011 11:51:00 PM

Congratulations John, on your tenth placement in this contest. Must have been so difficult to judge this contest with so many really wonderful entries.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2011 11:14:00 PM

Yours was one of my favorites in this contest. Congrats on your win, john.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2011 12:08:00 PM

John, Thanks so much for your entry in my contest..I appreciate you participating..Good work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2011 10:30:00 AM

JOHN, congratulations in Sara's contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/10/2011 10:15:00 AM

Insightful and well done. Love, Joyce

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/12/2011 5:52:00 PM

God is indeed love. Wisdom seeks virgins.

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/9/2011 3:56:00 PM

I really like this Choka form. Your poem is really good. Thank you John, for the win in your contest Nature's Bounty. That was a difficult form. I could not remember if I thanked you. So two thank you's is better than none.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2011 10:29:00 PM

AWEsome way to do the contest, john and thanks for my win in your contest. Luv, Andrea

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 11/6/2011 11:00:00 AM

nice one,you sound like Solomon here

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/6/2011 10:44:00 AM

Very nice how you "personified" wisdom as our Creator, John. A lovely choka for Sara's contest and I wish you success. Our catechism books always had a series of questions. One was, "What is God?" The answer, of course, "God is Love." Love and blessings, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 11/6/2011 7:50:00 AM

Lovely write, John. I'm glad your contest has filled so quickly - I had several attempts and had to throw the towel in on this one! I see you've had some great entries.