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Solo Sunflower

solo sunflower pregnant with seeds, standing tall - neighborly hello

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Date: 8/28/2023 7:04:00 PM
Hello Kim, a beautiful haiku,God bless you!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2023 8:33:00 PM
God bless you too, Mulu! Thank you!
Date: 8/28/2023 2:23:00 PM
I have always thought, how does that simple seemingly lightweight stalk hold up that giant head of the sunflower. Great work describing the sunflower. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2023 8:34:00 PM
I appreciate your comment! So true, Sara! Blessings
Date: 8/28/2023 3:12:00 AM
Love this one also.. you do the haiku so well
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2023 1:36:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 8/27/2023 1:42:00 PM
A wonderful write. I love the big sunflowers so pretty like this write. Have a great day.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 2:39:00 PM
So glad you liked this! Happy Sunday!
Date: 8/27/2023 7:11:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and a friendly hello.. A great poetic haiku! God bless.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 9:59:00 AM
I appreciate you, Robert!
Date: 8/27/2023 6:56:00 AM
A lonely yet beautiful image you've created Kim! Yet it seems that soon, she'll have plenty of company! A lovely haiku! Happy Sunday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 10:00:00 AM
Perhaps so! Visiting Minnesota and it felt like a friendly hello! :)
Date: 8/27/2023 6:56:00 AM
Lovely image, Kim. Reminds me of sunflower seeds I once threw in an unused section of garden. They were huge. Must do that again. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 10:01:00 AM
Yes…you must! Thank you, Joe!
Date: 8/27/2023 4:47:00 AM
liking the alliteration, and the image in that second line - lovely haiku! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Charlotte!
Date: 8/27/2023 2:11:00 AM
"Solo sunflower" I absolutely love this word pairing and the emotions this one evokes within such few words.. So deep and heartfelt.. The flow is impeccable and the alliteration is so creative!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya! It is exactly how I felt!
Date: 8/27/2023 1:59:00 AM
Solo sunflower, the title itself conveys so much. Absolutely stunning haiku. Loving the alliterations here . And depth of this 575
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, IE!
Date: 8/27/2023 1:20:00 AM
Awww to be "expecting" little sunflowers. This is a precious Haiku Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:30:00 AM
Love your take! Thank you, SV!
Date: 8/26/2023 9:54:00 PM
The statuesque, alluring sunflower has pride of place in this beauty of a poem. Nice work, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! :)
Date: 8/26/2023 9:51:00 PM
When ripe, they are pregnant with seeds ! Lovely description of the sunflower !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2023 6:31:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! :)

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