Kim Rodrigues Poet Tanka

Solo

bleakness of Autumn
    on a cloudy-sunless day
            muted colors droop
spirit’s  s i l e n t  interlude...
…blush of solo-leaf descant

12/1/2017


descant - a melody or counterpoint sung above the plainsong of the tenor
(from Merriam-Webster)

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Ravi Sathasivam December 3, 2017 at 2:22 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2017 at 6:45 AM Thank you, Ravi!

Probir Gupta December 1, 2017 at 9:38 AM Depth of brevity is enjoyably noticeable ... Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2017 at 9:59 AM Thank you, my friend! Blessings!

Janice Canerdy December 1, 2017 at 9:27 AM Descriptively moving, Kim! Janice Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2017 at 9:59 AM Thank you, Janice xx