Solo-Soldier Chronicles

Barren land, surround by sand, only my platoon to watch my back;
Who would have thought, I would have fought; look now I'm standing in Iraq.

People dying, soldiers crying, how did all this come to be?
What the heck, last time I checked, I was driving in Germany.

Hearts are racing, soldiers chasing, this is becoming a crazy fight;
This sector hot, I've been shot, are they really trying to take my life?

Adrenaline flowing, now I am going, using all the skills taught to me for such a day;
Shoulders on fire, I'm getting tired; but some one is really going to pay.

Think this through, what to do, can't run into the dark on my own;
This wound hurts, but dying is worst, can't imagine my son all alone.

M-4 cocked, took my first shot, Wait! Did that guy just hit the ground?
Do what I do, the killing  not cool, I vomit,  I think I want to go home now.

This is some crazy stuff, the times are rough, I am glad that this fight has finally stopped.
Time to regroup, bandaged and recoup; WHAT! Our staff sergeant has been shot.

Whoa! I'm next in line, my time to shine, never thought I would see one of our own die.
Back at base; this is an awful place, Browne you're promoted; I ask Allah WHY?

That night we wept, no one  slept, I prayed as any Muslim is supposed to pray;
Platoon looks at me strange, I Muslim that won't change, get some sleep tomorrows a new day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/2/2008 8:33:00 PM
Wow,they were cool with it I hope.great poem
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Date: 7/31/2008 2:45:00 PM
Leo - This poem brings my son to mind - he is in Iraq - poems written in two line stanzas - rhyming or not are couplets - your poem covers the emotions one goes through in war very well - God Bless
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