Solitude

SOLITUDE Ostracised Completion of my demise Cast aside Oh how I cried disowned To the wolves I’m thrown Discarded Left broken hearted Excluded Thoughts of return totally deluded Banished Feeling punished Disowned In my emotions I have drowned I never expected To be so rejected I feel a knife burning my heart I can’t continue not being a part I feel so alone I can’t live on my own

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/27/2020 1:45:00 PM

Hello Phil Dopson, so nice to meet you. You are feeling heartache, from a broken heart. When a love dies heart ache is felt. So we mourn the loss.Solitude is good for thinking when writing poetry. Or deep thoughts. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/28/2020 1:41:00 PM

Hello Phil Dopson you are on the right track. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Enjoy your dy my friend.

Phil Dopson
Date: 5/27/2020 2:17:00 PM

Thank you for comments I’ve been on a bit of a journey and most of my poetry reflects this but I think I’m finally starting to turn the corner and maybe my writing will brighten a little but it’s been very healing getting emotions and feelings down on paper it really helps Never wrote poetry before I can’t stop now Thanks again