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Solitude

Incessant din of jammed highways suddenly lulled to deserted streets quiet of rustle forlorn breeze plays laughter of birds, smiling sun greets diamond dews glisten ruby petals on a palette of piano, poetry muse in slow drench, rain falls and settles as fragrance flows wisteria avenues soft chimes within, no temple bells moments of now, create my world in solitude with nature, a divine spell counting cosmos, in stardust swirled wild waves pacified in peace of shore graceful moonlight, sunbeams in calm can hear beats in my deep heart's core a tranquil meditation, my sorrow's balm. sentinent of truth, has burned all my vigil fears vanished, no sound of human strife in viscous sedation, I enjoy a mystic sigil arcane power, I have fallen in love with life. Dated 6th May 2020 Sponsor Mark Toney Contest Name 2022 Poetry Marathon

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Date: 5/28/2020 7:25:00 AM
Ohhh, wonderful! So eloquent!
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Date: 5/13/2020 3:39:00 AM
Hmmm....this is one beautiful piece. Nice job
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Date: 5/12/2020 7:38:00 PM
Great flow of words and very enjoyable to read
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 9:20:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and kind words
Date: 5/12/2020 12:42:00 PM
Hello Debjani Mitra, this poem is excellent. Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/13/2020 12:59:00 PM
Hello Debjani Mitra,you are welcomed. Enjoy your day my friend,
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 9:21:00 PM
Great feeling that all of you liked. pleasure is all mine
Date: 5/11/2020 6:24:00 PM
Very nice except I miss the articles in places. Beau travail nonetheless.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 9:23:00 PM
I am trying to edit a bit on the article. thank you so much for the wishes
Date: 5/11/2020 1:42:00 PM
Debjani, Congratulations on being #1 on the list! David
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 9:23:00 PM
Thanks David for your wishes
Date: 5/11/2020 11:50:00 AM
Very Real and poetic up to thee end... Gracefull and en’tune’ing to the senses, all over a spectral of imagery given to the mind from the first line painting a perfect picture from which the reader dirives from the title. A good poem I love it.. my new favourite. Well Done. Give yourself a pat on the back for this one :) I will read it to others :)
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 9:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Matthew . you have been generous with your shower of praise..it's a real encouragement for me
Date: 5/11/2020 10:39:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS DEBJANI- LOVE YOUR POEM. IT FLOWS SO WELL.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear friend
Date: 5/11/2020 10:15:00 AM
Congrats on your top place! Great write! Like the style, busy with lots of images describing the scene!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Krish..it's wonderful to read your message
Date: 5/10/2020 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place win Debjani. This is first place in my book! I hope you enjoy a lovely Bharat Mata! Blessings xxoo
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 10:40:00 PM
So sweet of you..
Date: 5/9/2020 11:10:00 PM
I am very happy to see your lovely poem at the top of the Best New Poems list my friend. Congratulations! Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/10/2020 1:31:00 AM
Thanks dearest Connie,you have always supported wholeheartedly so many times.
Date: 5/9/2020 5:14:00 PM
Congrats Debjani on being top 1 in top 100 poems, makes me feel good that others see what I saw in this write!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/10/2020 1:32:00 AM
Thanks for the honour you showed
Date: 5/9/2020 4:21:00 PM
Congrats Debjani on a top win, just beautiful writing!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/10/2020 1:50:00 AM
Thanks a lot John
Date: 5/9/2020 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautifuly written POTD.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/10/2020 1:50:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and reading my poem
Date: 5/8/2020 8:19:00 PM
What a lovely melodic poem! It glows with illuminating imagery to soothe the soul Debjani. This gem is going straight into my Faves! Congratulations on your deserving POTD honor! I loved it! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/8/2020 9:03:00 AM
Nice wordsmithing, Debjani! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/7/2020 10:25:00 PM
Your thoughts leave me floating, drifting with ease. I am embracing the beauty, the tenderness and the calm. "I have fallen in love with life" Yes!! I can understand why. Congratulations Debjani, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 5/7/2020 1:57:00 PM
What a lovely affirmation of life with all your peaceful imagery: stars, piano music, moonbeams, flowers, birds, and meditation. Well done, Debjani, and sincere congratulations for your POTD. Best wishes, John
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Date: 5/7/2020 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD and it was very well written!! I liked it a lot!! God Bless you!!
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Date: 5/7/2020 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely POTD, Debjani.
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Date: 5/7/2020 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honor_Constance
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Date: 5/7/2020 9:21:00 AM
A very poetic write...full of joy...Congratulations Debjani on POTD...All the best
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Date: 5/7/2020 8:26:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous piece Debjani. Stunningly so. Congratulations, I see it a well deserved win and POTD! I must tuck this one in my faves. Have a wonderful day dear poetess, xomo!
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Date: 5/7/2020 7:32:00 AM
Beautiful write, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/7/2020 6:37:00 AM
Congrats on poet of the day! Lovely poem. I have fallen n love with life! Optimism is great sign of a strong positive mind.
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