Solitude

Mountains occupy my mind I crave the solitude, Upon their lofty heights I find Peace, and lifted mood. The echoing of jousting crows A skylarks warbling call, Sunshine playing across a tarn I find such joy in all. Out there on the mountainside Is where I long to be, Among the rugged crags and peaks, I need no company. Entry for PREMIERE CONTEST NO 175,ANY FORM, ANY THEME,UP TO A MAX OF 20 LINES Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 8/9/18. Placed 3rd.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/9/2018 5:04:00 PM

Hello Gary Smith, now i know where you want to go for solitude.Nice! As for me... ir is sitting on a beach watching rushing the waves come to shore.Or watching a waterfall rushing to the bottom to reach a lake or stream. For me the sound of water is calming. Have a nice evening my friend.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/9/2018 5:06:00 PM

Thank you Darlene, the mountains in the photo are where I spend a lot of time :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/8/2018 12:40:00 PM

They are your company. We are spoken to in many beautiful and mysterious ways. Thank you for sharing this wonderful gem. Have a great day!

Gary Smith
Date: 9/8/2018 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Joe :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/8/2018 11:33:00 AM

Very nice Gary. I can understand :)

Gary Smith
Date: 9/8/2018 11:36:00 AM

Thank you Heidi :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/8/2018 10:36:00 AM

(Not of the human variety, but..) it sounds like you'd have plenty of heart-filling and soul-stirring company, Gary; with Mother Nature and the majesty of your surroundings. Solitude is a beautiful thing. 'Mountains occupy my mind' - such a stunning way to start a superb poem! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Gary Smith
Date: 9/8/2018 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Susan :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/8/2018 9:58:00 AM

A FAVE for me, Gary. Lovely.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/8/2018 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Line :)