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Soliloquy In Three

Sculpture  ~  The Thinker  ~  Auguste Rodin

What's life for?
"To be or
not to be",
sums up me:
questioning
everything.
Should I go
or say no?
Do I fight
or take flight?
Close my eyes
or apprise
all that's swirled
in the world?
Go outside,
take a ride?
Or stay home,
write a poem?
Read a book?
Take a look
at the news,
or refuse?
Leave my job,
be a slob -
or work more
at each chore?
Help to feed
those in need?

Answers come,
but where from?
Deep within,
where it's been
waiting for
"To be or
not to be",
now I see:
always start
with your heart -
there you'll find
peace of mind.

written 7 Sep 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Radhakrishna Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 11:47 PM
Oh My God! what a superb write!! John, congrats on your win with this ‘Thinker’ Great composition and so true!!
Watt Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 8:51 PM
Thank you for your enthusiastic support, Krish.
Kauffman Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 9:07 PM
To swing or to take - to bunt or to steal - to stay or to go - the questions of life well written my friend and succintly stated! The heart of love is always a place of peace when ambivalence steals our serenity. Congratulations on your first place win my friend!
Watt Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 9:15 PM
Thanks for the read and fun comment, dear friend! To go to the playoffs or to wait another day - magic number is one! Come on Giants, win win win!
Roper Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 8:24 PM
Hey , hey , John, 1st place :) congratulations on your win sir. Hugs eve
Watt Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 8:41 PM
Thanks Eve, lovely to hear from you tonight. Hugs ~ John
Fowler Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 6:58 PM
Congratulations on your placement John! Linda
Watt Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 7:32 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Proxenos Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 11:46 AM
Best of luck in the contest John, such true facts told in two to three word lines - admire your versatility with your poetry - awesome, very cool. Well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Watt Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 4:20 PM
Jennifer, thank you for your sweet words and blessings. Always so supportive and kind.
Ermine Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 9:43 PM
.... John, to achieve deep and pondering, life direction, choices in this restrictive form is a feat you absolutely smashed! Massive honours accompany your upcoming Top Win!!
Watt Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Sigrid, you deserve some credit for being the first one I read in this form and you set the bar high with your Dot Cheetah! You always leave great comments, too. Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 5:52 PM
love love this, John. Now I really want to look into that contest and try it myself.
Watt Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 9:46 PM
Give it a shot, I'm sure you'll nail it. Thanks for the thumbs up!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 3:28 AM
Lots of thinking going on! I’m thinking about the piece of art, the poet and his ponderings! :)
Watt Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 3:12 PM
Thinks for the thanks... I mean thanks for the thinks, Kim!
Buehler Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 6:51 PM
John, this is such an interesting and delightful verse, crafted with skill wisdom, and great rhyming. Love the picture, too. Best of wishes for the contest.
Watt Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 1:25 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful read and review, my friend!
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