Solid Orange Lights

My conscious mind was
Shocked when 
I realized I was slamming on my brakes.
There are
Three lanes of solid orange lights, 
As far as I can see down the interstate.
A wreck most probably.
We began inching our way uphill, pretending to be socialized.
No one can see anything.
Maybe a trucker, but none of us in cars.
The cars at the top of the next hill are not fighting for lanes yet,
So I wonder how far we are going to inch our way toward our destination.
I call four people.
One is my husband.
Find out what’s happening, I tell him.
My GPS went on the blink this week; it won’t be any help.
Three of the people are co-workers.
I ask them for a favor.
All say yes.
One I have gotten out of bed.
Inch. Inch. Inch. Inch. Inch.
One car pulls out of the right hand lane, and drives like a maniac down the emergency lane.
A Mustang.
Go figure.
We inch our way to the top of the hill 
I can now see a non-moving ribbon of orange lights.
My husband calls me.
Nothing on the news yet.
No empathy or patience now, I look for my chance.
Aha! A slow car.
I swerve into the right-hand lane, the one I never use.
We inch forward a few more inches.
Suddenly my car pulls a sharp right.
She and I race down the emergency lane,
Like there are hungry cheetahs after us.
I see flashing red and blue lights to my left
As we exit.
High above on the Interstate bridge
We are at a stoplight, facing an Interstate entrance ramp.
The cars going up this ramp are uninhibited; free to fly,
I watch five cars go up the ramp, ahead of me.
I swear at the light for not changing fast enough.
I marvel at the lack of cars as I re-enter the Interstate.
I am so early, I stop and buy gas.
Amazingly, I am the first car at work,
Beating everyone I called.
I love being an impatient risk taker.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/9/2018 7:30:00 PM
Great storytelling... An unexpected ending... Well done, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/10/2018 12:59:00 AM
I was getting worried, because I had been waiting for your comment. Welcome, my friend!
Date: 3/9/2018 11:59:00 AM
This poem drew me in a great deal. I love how you worded this and all the imagery. Thanks for sharing, well done!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/9/2018 12:15:00 PM
Thank you, Kyle. I appreciate it. It really happened to me today, on my way to work.
Date: 3/9/2018 11:06:00 AM
A lovely message underlying this poem...certainly consciousness present...to maneuver thru traffic to arrive at your destination
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/9/2018 11:19:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate it.
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