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Solid Gray


Solid gray skies
   Over daylilies trying to bloom
    Several different species so colorful
      Open only a day, live life to the fullest
        What have I done with my nearly 29,151 days

Birds fly in
  Mostly to feed from birdseeds
     The feeders need a refill so they can eat
       Those birds usually fly in, overfill before a rain
          Another day of possible showers so they have to eat

Fresh seed put out
  Mockingbirds zoom across flowerbeds
     Land, catch a bug, zoom out
       Another mockingbird lands on the cement
          Bobbles along like a roadrunner

Redbirds flock in
  Hit the red feeder that matches his color, perfect camouflage
    Boy, he is eating gourmet food
      From the buffet
         Rakes out what he doesn't like

Sparrows fly in
   Feast upon the discarded seed
      That landed upon the cement
        They gobble up those small seeds
           Fill up in just a small amount of time

Female red cardinal
   Flies in and lands on a wood feeder, aged, grayed with time
    It seems to match her color perfectly
      She is harder to see since she blends in
        She fills up and flies away

Amazing
   No susurrus in the pines
      No crows cawing all the time
        Just the symphony of songbirds tickling my ears
          And the cymbals clanging out woodpecker's notes

A few minutes out on the porch
   How it makes my day
     Now a zephyr begins to move
        Stirring the asparagus and spirea
           Wow! A break in the clouds.

The sunlight beams
   Casting its morning light
      Across my wildest dreams
         A flower garden with more plants
            To feed the birds, bees and butterflies

Thank you
  God for your creation
    For your gift of flowers
      A mixture of clouds, rain and sunshine
         All of life upon this earth


         
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Kerr Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 10:34 PM
This is a masterpiece of imaginative words, detail and dedication from your lyrical pen. It unfolds and unravels like a classic tale, Howard
Kendrick Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 5:29 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. I am delighted that you found it lyrical. Sara K
George Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 11:49 PM
So nice that you can watch all these birds, sitting in your porch. I too love bird watching. But we don't have as many variety of birds as you have mentioned. Earlier, there used to be many trees in the area where we live. But new constructions have come up and trees have been cut down. So the birds that used to come are no more there. Enjoyed reading your poem dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 12:48 PM
Valsa, there has been a change in the habit that I had for the birds here in my yard. I hope maybe I can add some more plantings either this fall or next spring so that there will be more for all of nature to feed freely. Your visits add a kind dimension to my page. Sara K
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June 13, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Sara, I spend time out on my decks (I have two) and see many of the same things you noted. While it's a bit different, I can imagine you sitting with me as well. The hedges are flowering right now, and there is a sweet scent everywhere. IF you are in NY in the spring/summer let me know so we can enjoy this together!!!
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Duke, I have been to New York twice in my life, but I don't expect to be there again because of complications from aging. I am sure that out on your decks is a beautiful place and I am sure that I would enjoy the space for a visit. Sara K
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 4:53 AM
lovely write, with a very meaningful last stanza
Kendrick Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visit and nice comments. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 4:16 PM
This is a really good one with graciousness and gratitude. Wow. I can't do the math in my head but did that equal your lifetime?
Kendrick Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 6:25 AM
Andrea, Divide it by 79 and see if that is right. LOL..Sara K
Rolland Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 3:24 PM
so beautifully written, could be a better place than earth in springtime ? a "thrilling" poem indeed, what a pleasure Sara
Kendrick Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Yann, I can think of one place that I am sure is much nicer than earth, but I can't imagine exactly what it will be like even with the description in the Bible. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 12:14 PM
You get complete control as you put pen to paper and recount the event and your creative juices flow. Yes, Sara, God's creations can not be counted or limited within space and time constraints.
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Yes, Lasaad, just a little time is all I can write about each day. The creation goes on while I do what has to be done. Thank you for your visit and time spent here. Sara K
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June 6, 2024 at 9:08 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Solid Gray" write/wonderful ending. What a great/pretty picture. Yes, we must say, "Thank you God for your creation" everyday... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 8:14 AM
I can see you eyeing God’s creation. It all comes into your hands as you write of the experience. Always a joy to read, Sara!
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Why, thank you, Kim. Yes it is quite an experience to see God's creation. Sara K
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