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Solid As a Rock

In your eyes, I’m a nobody Not much worth a look Left unnoticed in one corner Where no one saw me weep Do I look unappealing, I wonder Tried flashing a bright smile Under the blinding noon sky But still your eyes avoid mine And you look past way beyond Do I look blurry, I wonder Finally, I caught a glimpse When you tripped on my sore foot But your gaze seemed ablaze As if I was a lump on the road Do I look frail, I wonder Forgotten and uncared for I felt exhausted and weak Under the heat of the sun I rested Till the storm passed through the night Must I hold on, I wonder One thing though is certain I may be bruised and broken But the love I have for you Remains solid as a rock 5 April 2018

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Date: 4/5/2018 8:01:00 AM
Introspective, Elaine. I really like these lines: "Under the heat of the sun I rested / Till the storm passed through the night" but I do miss the missing repeat (.....I wonder) at the end. I enjoyed the tribute to a common emotion: being ignored. Powerful narrative.
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Elaine Gonzales
Date: 4/6/2018 1:16:00 AM
Thank you for your visit Reason. I'm pleased to know that you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate that you mentioned missing the repeat. I thought of concluding the 'I wonder' feeling of being ignored with a positive note at the end (although I contemplated on adding the last line "Am I being foolish, I wonder"). All the best :-)

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