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Solemn's Sin

As i sit here above the world as i look at you My thoughts are filled with solemn's sin but i have no desire to pick you my flower ill just sit right here watching you bloom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/6/2015 8:23:00 AM
Oh, my! Shades of David on the rooftop, looking across to watch Bathsheba bathe. I think this is free verse, Ezra. Nice expression of temptation.
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Date: 4/20/2014 6:18:00 AM
Wonderful write and congrats on your poem being featured this week, ezra
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Date: 1/24/2014 11:09:00 AM
Great expressive work that you have penned..I enjoyed reading it today..Sara
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