Solemn's Sin

As i sit here above the world
as i look at you
My thoughts are filled with solemn's sin
but i have no desire  to pick you my flower
ill just sit right here watching
you bloom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 6, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Oh, my! Shades of David on the rooftop, looking across to watch Bathsheba bathe. I think this is free verse, Ezra. Nice expression of temptation.
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April 20, 2014 at 6:18 AM
Wonderful write and congrats on your poem being featured this week, ezra
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January 24, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Great expressive work that you have penned..I enjoyed reading it today..Sara
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