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meal tray on her lap dining table set for two mocking the widow Competition 'get your Senryu on'. Submitted 11th April 2015

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Date: 9/11/2015 12:03:00 PM
Sad, sweet and Beautiful.
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Date: 4/26/2015 6:55:00 PM
Hi Viv, thank you for the sweet reply
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:10:00 PM
Viv, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA
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Date: 4/19/2015 12:20:00 AM
Thanks Linda,a dark topic, but suits the form. Viv x
Date: 4/17/2015 2:31:00 PM
Looks like you've penned a winner. Good onya mate.
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Date: 4/17/2015 11:33:00 PM
Cheers, Scott. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/12/2015 12:08:00 PM
...back with congratulations, Viv! // paul
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/12/2015 1:16:00 PM
Likewise, Paul, you never compose a bad 'un. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/12/2015 12:38:00 AM
Clever Senryu, Viv. I haven't seen the winners from this contest. But, when i do.. I am sure I will be back... Love Linda
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/12/2015 12:44:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, a nice challenge. Viv x
Date: 4/11/2015 9:48:00 PM
I sure enjoy this one! I think you got a win, from what I see Judy saying to you. Then Congratulations too!!
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Date: 4/12/2015 12:44:00 AM
Everyone's a winner, Andrea, writers and readers, which is nice. Thanks for dropping by. Viv x
Date: 4/11/2015 5:32:00 PM
I can picture Maggie Smith sitting there with that Maggie look on her face...Simply excellent poetry...Thanks for being in my contest.
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Date: 4/12/2015 12:45:00 AM
Good mental picture, Judy, thanks for the placement. Viv x
Date: 4/11/2015 10:17:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Mr Viv:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 12:48:00 AM
....and congrats back at you too, Jan. Viv x
Date: 4/11/2015 7:16:00 AM
Oh so sad a write Mr Viv:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2015 7:25:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. I visit a couple of widows for a chat, and the table is an oddly poignant feature. Viv x
Date: 4/11/2015 6:44:00 AM
Sad...so sad. Written well, Viv. Good luck in the contest.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/11/2015 7:24:00 AM
Cheers, Jade, love the hair x
Date: 4/11/2015 3:47:00 AM
Very sad and touching senryu, Viv. All the best. // paul
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Date: 4/11/2015 6:21:00 AM
Cheers, Paul. Hope you're well, and everything is ticketty-boo in you neck of the woods. Regards, Viv