Sole Food

meal tray on her lap
dining table set for two
mocking the widow

Competition 'get your Senryu on'.
Submitted 11th April 2015

bereavementsenryu

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James Inman

September 11, 2015 at 12:03 PM

Sad, sweet and Beautiful.

Poet Destroyer A

April 26, 2015 at 6:55 PM

Hi Viv, thank you for the sweet reply

Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 5:10 PM

Viv, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA

Viv Wigley

April 19, 2015 at 12:20 AM

Thanks Linda,a dark topic, but suits the form. Viv x

Scott Thirtyseven

April 17, 2015 at 2:31 PM

Looks like you've penned a winner. Good onya mate.

Viv Wigley

April 17, 2015 at 11:33 PM

Cheers, Scott. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus

April 12, 2015 at 12:08 PM

...back with congratulations, Viv! // paul

Viv Wigley

April 12, 2015 at 1:16 PM

Likewise, Paul, you never compose a bad 'un. Regards, Viv

Poet Destroyer A

April 12, 2015 at 12:38 AM

Clever Senryu, Viv. I haven't seen the winners from this contest. But, when i do.. I am sure I will be back... Love Linda

Viv Wigley

April 12, 2015 at 12:44 AM

Thanks, Linda, a nice challenge. Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

April 11, 2015 at 9:48 PM

I sure enjoy this one! I think you got a win, from what I see Judy saying to you. Then Congratulations too!!

Viv Wigley

April 12, 2015 at 12:44 AM

Everyone's a winner, Andrea, writers and readers, which is nice. Thanks for dropping by. Viv x

Judy Konos

April 11, 2015 at 5:32 PM

I can picture Maggie Smith sitting there with that Maggie look on her face...Simply excellent poetry...Thanks for being in my contest.

Viv Wigley

April 12, 2015 at 12:45 AM

Good mental picture, Judy, thanks for the placement. Viv x

Jan Allison

April 11, 2015 at 10:17 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Mr Viv:-) Hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

April 12, 2015 at 12:48 AM

....and congrats back at you too, Jan. Viv x

Jan Allison

April 11, 2015 at 7:16 AM

Oh so sad a write Mr Viv:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

April 11, 2015 at 7:25 AM

Thanks, Jan. I visit a couple of widows for a chat, and the table is an oddly poignant feature. Viv x

Eileen Manassian

April 11, 2015 at 6:44 AM

Sad...so sad. Written well, Viv. Good luck in the contest.

Viv Wigley

April 11, 2015 at 7:24 AM

Cheers, Jade, love the hair x

Paul Callus

April 11, 2015 at 3:47 AM

Very sad and touching senryu, Viv. All the best. // paul

Viv Wigley

April 11, 2015 at 6:21 AM

Cheers, Paul. Hope you're well, and everything is ticketty-boo in you neck of the woods. Regards, Viv

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