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Soldiers Strait

Wandering And Loafing thither-stunned I knew, Scorching sweat-and a grim creature view, Aye troubled and loaded vista of misery, Swirling with abjectness seeming weary, Nor they stand upright neither they sit calm, Where they where ,never in placid nay in ominous realm, Prepare for prepare on this abominable flame of war, They freaked out through futile power, Hence ‘tis a royal road through eke’ out but volatile, Ye- grudgingly yet’ a way but vile, What he must –must he be, but far and away, Gibbet solemnly- but utter mere no word-to say, Confined yea bind ah! Archaic men-at-arms, You’d be among these, with no charm and warms, Maunder surreal-y even in the day-and night watch, Discern–castles in air while-lying on a patch, Fair a mere simpleton creature, when dies, Forgot at-once posthumously with no suspiration and sighs, No well being and vivification where he dwelt and grew, Aye beneath the troubled shallow’y spring under the yoke of fo, Regime demand integrity, excelence and professionalism, They say trinquality, solace, and humanism, Tongue introverted, knees knocked, head stood, Muster out as OAP, at hoar,man-made-wood.

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Date: 9/3/2014 1:29:00 PM
I am so glad to hear, I inspire others. I sent you soup mail. PD
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M. Shahid H. Chouhdry
Date: 9/3/2014 11:41:00 PM
Thank you I have got that.Once again thank you
Date: 9/3/2014 11:15:00 AM
Hi M. Shahid, I was hoping to read a new poem from you. But, lookie here. I found this poem. I like the tone, and the straight epic aim, in which stands upright. War, brings so much more than power and death. Posted at the end, I found tranquility, solace. Nice move.. Love LINDA
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M. Shahid H. Chouhdry
Date: 9/3/2014 11:46:00 AM
Nice to see you back in mailbox, Linda you dont know your arrival soothes me and I want to say in plane words You bring me Joy....lol

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