Solar Moments

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Quote: Give me the splendid, silent sun with all his beams full-dazzling by Walt Whitman.

2nd in 4 Beautiful Lines Contest (Sponsor: Constance La France)

Judged: March 11th, 2025

Daylight
tickles leaves sparks 
seeds buds unfurl ~
beauty undercover in Moon hegemony

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/12/2025 8:17:00 PM

unique. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.

Trina Layne
Date: 3/13/2025 1:06:00 PM

:) Appreciated.

Jeanette Swan

Date: 3/8/2025 1:13:00 PM

Love this. Solar moments of livingness, hidden under the moon. The assonance and chime of meaning in leaves and seeds and the long ee vowel sound makes the poem linger. Fave. J :)

Trina Layne
Date: 3/8/2025 3:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jeanette!