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Quote: Give me the splendid, silent sun with all his beams full-dazzling by Walt Whitman.

2nd in 4 Beautiful Lines Contest (Sponsor: Constance La France)

Judged: March 11th, 2025

Solar Moments

Daylight tickles leaves sparks seeds buds unfurl ~ beauty undercover in Moon hegemony
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mysore Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:17 PM
unique. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Layne Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 1:06 PM
:) Appreciated.
Swan Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Love this. Solar moments of livingness, hidden under the moon. The assonance and chime of meaning in leaves and seeds and the long ee vowel sound makes the poem linger. Fave. J :)
Layne Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 3:01 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanette!
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