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Quote: Give me the splendid, silent sun with all his beams full-dazzling by Walt Whitman.

Daylight tickles leaves sparks seeds buds unfurl ~ beauty undercover in Moon hegemony

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Date: 3/12/2025 8:17:00 PM
unique. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/13/2025 1:06:00 PM
:) Appreciated.
Date: 3/8/2025 1:13:00 PM
Love this. Solar moments of livingness, hidden under the moon. The assonance and chime of meaning in leaves and seeds and the long ee vowel sound makes the poem linger. Fave. J :)
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/8/2025 3:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanette!

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