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Solar Eclipse Poem on Nature

Solar Eclipse Free Verse Poem | Poem on Nature As the sun rises, With lots of surprises, Granting one after the other, As slowly the day goes on, The moon comes out mysteriously, Blocking the sunny view of the happy people, As the day gets dark, As the nights of the shadows, Making all of them frown, The day continues for a while, And immediately vanishes, The people who saw that spectacular event, Get surprised and worried, The children get excited, As the night goes long, A night in the middle of the day. Source: https://poemtheart.com/solar-eclipse/ (By Sarah Shahzad, December 2019)

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Date: 1/7/2021 7:26:00 PM
Mentioned breify in poem l wrote few years back called the moon yes dose not happen very often beautifal peace xx
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Date: 5/1/2020 9:18:00 AM
Your words are beautiful and mesmerizing. They convey how people variously feel, as day turns to bight. I worked in astronomy for many years and know how amazing total solar eclipses are; unforgettable, just as your poem.
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Date: 2/13/2020 4:00:00 AM
Thought provoking, intelligent, creative work. Well done Howard
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Date: 1/20/2020 8:47:00 AM
A very interesting way to express an eclipse.
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Muddasar javad
Date: 1/20/2020 10:26:00 PM
thank you so much i'm happy you like it..
Date: 1/10/2020 12:04:00 PM
Mudassar, this description of a solar esclipse is dramatic, vivid and lovely. :)
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Date: 1/13/2020 12:20:00 AM
thank you so much for your thoughtful comments :)
Date: 1/9/2020 12:52:00 PM
Nice flow and terribly evocative, as anything describing a solar eclipse has to be, for it is truly unearthly. I have an astronomy background and seen a couple, as well as numerous partials. Good Luck with your poetry.
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Date: 1/10/2020 4:30:00 AM
i'm happy you like it :)
Date: 1/4/2020 12:26:00 PM
Nicely descriptive piece, Muddasar. I especially like the way you describe how the people react to the eclipse. // Barry
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Date: 1/8/2020 3:31:00 AM
thanks for nice feedback!
Date: 1/2/2020 7:53:00 PM
A wonderful write of the eclipse. Enjoyed.
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Muddasar javad
Date: 1/3/2020 1:08:00 AM
thank's
Date: 1/2/2020 7:04:00 AM
This was beautiful, such a descriptive piece of writing.
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Date: 1/3/2020 1:08:00 AM
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)
Date: 1/1/2020 9:48:00 PM
Cool poem; God bless -JT
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Muddasar javad
Date: 1/4/2020 1:33:00 AM
thank you so much :)
Date: 1/1/2020 9:05:00 AM
There are time when the day turns into darkness. This happening makes us turn inward for answers.
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Muddasar javad
Date: 1/8/2020 3:33:00 AM
sure thing & thank you for comment...
Date: 1/1/2020 3:24:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this. I like your picturesque last line:"A night in the middle of the day." God bless you.
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Muddasar javad
Date: 1/8/2020 3:32:00 AM
you are so sweet & thank you for taking the time to read it.. :) bless & love
Date: 12/27/2019 2:51:00 PM
It was quite beautiful, a wonderful pen to the eclipse. Enjoyed.
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Date: 12/30/2019 1:26:00 AM
thank you so much :)
Date: 12/26/2019 6:56:00 AM
The ending line captures the essence of the scene--well done!
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Date: 12/30/2019 1:26:00 AM
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)
Date: 12/26/2019 5:53:00 AM
Did you see this last night? I saw that it was over Asia.. great poem.
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Date: 12/30/2019 1:30:00 AM
yep & thank 4 nice feedback..