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Solar Eclipse Poem On Nature

Solar Eclipse
Free Verse Poem | Poem on Nature
As the sun rises,

With lots of surprises,

Granting one after the other,

As slowly the day goes on,

The moon comes out mysteriously,

Blocking the sunny view of the happy people,

As the day gets dark,

As the nights of the shadows,

Making all of them frown,

The day continues for a while,

And immediately vanishes,

The people who saw that spectacular event,

Get surprised and worried,

The children get excited,

As the night goes long,

A night in the middle of the day.

Source: https://poemtheart.com/solar-eclipse/
(By Sarah Shahzad, December 2019)

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David Scott January 7, 2021 at 7:26 PM Mentioned breify in poem l wrote few years back called the moon yes dose not happen very often beautifal peace xx

Mark Peterson May 1, 2020 at 9:18 AM Your words are beautiful and mesmerizing. They convey how people variously feel, as day turns to bight. I worked in astronomy for many years and know how amazing total solar eclipses are; unforgettable, just as your poem.

Howard Kerr February 13, 2020 at 4:00 AM Thought provoking, intelligent, creative work. Well done Howard

Richard Lamoureux January 20, 2020 at 8:47 AM A very interesting way to express an eclipse. poemtheart poemtheart January 20, 2020 at 10:26 PM thank you so much i'm happy you like it..

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 10, 2020 at 12:04 PM Mudassar, this description of a solar esclipse is dramatic, vivid and lovely. :) poemtheart poemtheart January 13, 2020 at 12:20 AM thank you so much for your thoughtful comments :)

Mark Peterson January 9, 2020 at 12:52 PM Nice flow and terribly evocative, as anything describing a solar eclipse has to be, for it is truly unearthly. I have an astronomy background and seen a couple, as well as numerous partials. Good Luck with your poetry. poemtheart poemtheart January 10, 2020 at 4:30 AM i'm happy you like it :)

Barry Stebbings January 4, 2020 at 12:26 PM Nicely descriptive piece, Muddasar. I especially like the way you describe how the people react to the eclipse. // Barry poemtheart poemtheart January 8, 2020 at 3:31 AM thanks for nice feedback!

M. L. Kiser January 2, 2020 at 7:53 PM A wonderful write of the eclipse. Enjoyed. poemtheart poemtheart January 3, 2020 at 1:08 AM thank's

Chris Green January 2, 2020 at 7:04 AM This was beautiful, such a descriptive piece of writing. poemtheart poemtheart January 3, 2020 at 1:08 AM I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)

Honestly J.T. January 1, 2020 at 9:48 PM Cool poem; God bless -JT poemtheart poemtheart January 4, 2020 at 1:33 AM thank you so much :)

Lunita Blanca January 1, 2020 at 9:05 AM There are time when the day turns into darkness. This happening makes us turn inward for answers. poemtheart poemtheart January 8, 2020 at 3:33 AM sure thing & thank you for comment...

Beata Agustin January 1, 2020 at 3:24 AM Wow! Thanks for sharing this. I like your picturesque last line:"A night in the middle of the day." God bless you. poemtheart poemtheart January 8, 2020 at 3:32 AM you are so sweet & thank you for taking the time to read it.. :) bless & love

M. L. Kiser December 27, 2019 at 2:51 PM It was quite beautiful, a wonderful pen to the eclipse. Enjoyed. poemtheart poemtheart December 30, 2019 at 1:26 AM thank you so much :)

Vijay Pandit December 26, 2019 at 6:56 AM The ending line captures the essence of the scene--well done! poemtheart poemtheart December 30, 2019 at 1:26 AM I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)

Silent One December 26, 2019 at 5:53 AM Did you see this last night? I saw that it was over Asia.. great poem. poemtheart poemtheart December 30, 2019 at 1:30 AM yep & thank 4 nice feedback..