Solar Eclipse March 19th

for a few moments
Selene and Helios dance
mankind bows it's head
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 2:13 PM
hey, great poem. Looks like an oldie of yours now!!
Wigley Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Good Lord, Andrea, have you been rummaging around in the back of my closet? Watch out for dusty poems! Viv x
La France Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Viv, this a beautiful haiku, I love that last line, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, in the chilly morn . . .
Wigley Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Much thanks , oh broken one. Viv x
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 4:12 AM
It cloudy here cant see the eclipse at all lol great haiku:-) Hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 9:11 AM
LOL - you inspired me to write an eclipse haiku too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 8:54 AM
I went to the pub early today, and lent a friend a welding mask. Not for the eclipse, he's just so darned ugly :) Thanks for stopping by, Jan. Viv x
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