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Solar Eclipse

There's something I feel that I still haven't said, Quotes that haven't straddled my lips. When poetry wheels don't turn in my head, Words can cast a solar eclipse. ©2012 Honestly JT

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/21/2013 7:17:00 PM
energetic poem with vitality. I like the paranomal subjects too. Imagine someone thinking your thoughts and u don't have to say a word or u say the same thing at the same time.
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Date: 9/5/2013 11:01:00 PM
Hi P.J. Well crafted write I can relate to..Thanks for sharing this one with me as well as visiting my work. Regards, Ken
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Date: 9/3/2013 5:32:00 AM
A super piece Poet. I like it.
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Date: 9/2/2013 6:03:00 PM
wow! softly and sensual .. P J., sending soup mail....Linda
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Date: 9/1/2013 11:53:00 PM
Very nice!!! Hugs, Maggie Mae
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Date: 8/25/2013 5:38:00 PM
Awesome, from quotes that straddle, to solar eclipses, nice write.
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Date: 8/22/2013 3:17:00 PM
You have impressive creative talent . What an awesome poem... love the line "Quotes that haven't straddled my lips." Words put together so well that I get a little ping and zing feel :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 8:15:00 AM
"Words can cast a solar eclipse"...I like that, nice poem! MC
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Date: 8/21/2013 4:04:00 PM
expertly written PJ love it Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/21/2013 7:23:00 AM
Perfectly said PJ :) Enjoyed it today :)
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Date: 8/20/2013 10:06:00 PM
Cute and so true! Most of us feel this way once in awhile.good write! Hugs
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Date: 8/20/2013 3:16:00 PM
I love eclipses, well except when the muse is what is hiding...awesome write in so few words :)
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Date: 8/20/2013 10:23:00 AM
very beautiful though and write.
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Date: 8/20/2013 7:26:00 AM
I really like this. And seeing the kinds of poetic responses we can have even when the muse seems not to be with us!
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Date: 8/20/2013 3:15:00 AM
This is beautiful, Justice! :) I'm sure they will cross your lips soon, those quotations you are looking for! Lovely write. Thanks for your visits. I didn't know that you had created a new form. That is SOOOOO awesome. Becca told me about it. I would like to give it a try sometime! :) Take care
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