Solar Eclipse

There's something I feel that I still haven't said,
Quotes that haven't straddled my lips.
When poetry wheels don't turn in my head,
Words can cast a solar eclipse.



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Spase Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 7:17 PM
energetic poem with vitality. I like the paranomal subjects too. Imagine someone thinking your thoughts and u don't have to say a word or u say the same thing at the same time.
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September 5, 2013 at 11:01 PM
Hi P.J. Well crafted write I can relate to..Thanks for sharing this one with me as well as visiting my work. Regards, Ken
Mohammed Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 5:32 AM
A super piece Poet. I like it.
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September 2, 2013 at 6:03 PM
wow! softly and sensual .. P J., sending soup mail....Linda
Mcafee Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 11:53 PM
Very nice!!! Hugs, Maggie Mae
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Awesome, from quotes that straddle, to solar eclipses, nice write.
Anglesey Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 3:17 PM
You have impressive creative talent . What an awesome poem... love the line "Quotes that haven't straddled my lips." Words put together so well that I get a little ping and zing feel :)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 8:15 AM
"Words can cast a solar eclipse"...I like that, nice poem! MC
Hamilton Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 4:04 PM
expertly written PJ love it Shadow x smile
Neels Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Perfectly said PJ :) Enjoyed it today :)
Macfarlane Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 10:06 PM
Cute and so true! Most of us feel this way once in awhile.good write! Hugs
Adams Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 3:16 PM
I love eclipses, well except when the muse is what is hiding...awesome write in so few words :)
Shines Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 10:23 AM
very beautiful though and write.
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 7:26 AM
I really like this. And seeing the kinds of poetic responses we can have even when the muse seems not to be with us!
Manassian Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 3:15 AM
This is beautiful, Justice! :) I'm sure they will cross your lips soon, those quotations you are looking for! Lovely write. Thanks for your visits. I didn't know that you had created a new form. That is SOOOOO awesome. Becca told me about it. I would like to give it a try sometime! :) Take care
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