Solar Competition
Sun soaks us all in first fresh fun.
It keeps us all ALIVE WE THRIVE.
Making MERCURY more mistifying.
Meanwhile, victorious VENUS vears very
Vengeful.
Eager EARTH edges eastward earnestly
Effectually elemental
Miraculously MARS mistook URANUS
urshering in an urgent understanding,
For a quiet star.
SATURN satisfactorily goes
Afar sixth place with rings.
And JUPITER awaits a hot July just joining
NEPTUNE napping not noticing near naked
polluted PLUTO presumably with pressure
Possessing a powerful punch. Positioned
Positively, prone, toward percise potential.
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