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Solace in Darkness

My heart was once blackened with each droplet of lies left by him, Now it hangs iridescently by a tree, Wrung out are the bloodshot tinted tears, Leaving me to rest in the velvet dark, As his crimson stained memory drips into oblivion.

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Karen Jones

Date: 2/11/2024 5:38:00 PM

Wow this is really good!

Ink Empress

Date: 2/4/2024 6:42:00 AM

Sis! Good to see you post here, i see your take on “ bloodshot” keiths prompt? Btw please do ask sara i am hosting on island this week. Hope to see you both write for my prompt. I loved the rhymes here and this one hits home too! “As his crimson stained memory drips into oblivion.“how creative is the way you weave emotions. Sending you light.

Billie Jama
Date: 2/4/2024 7:13:00 AM

Yes, indeed it was for Keith's prompt "Bloodshot". The prompt led me to a direction that I don't normally write. I didn't realise that you were hosting this weeks prompt. Sara and I will surely write to it. Thank you for your support and lovely words of encouragement as always sis.

John Lawless

Date: 2/4/2024 6:05:00 AM

and yet the heart stands ready to open again....to the sunlight. Beautifully done Billie

Billie Jama
Date: 2/4/2024 7:16:00 AM

Thank you, that was indeed that I was trying to portray.

Billie Jama
Date: 2/4/2024 7:15:00 AM

Thank you, that was indeed that I was trying to portray.

Tom Woody

Date: 2/4/2024 5:53:00 AM

Good riddance to bad rubbish I always say. Vivid poetry

Billie Jama
Date: 2/4/2024 7:16:00 AM

Hahaha yes! Thank you kindly for the support