Solace

When I listen hard enough, I hear it 
as life evaporates, I fear it. 
Will I dance in heaven or writhe in hell 
or return to nothingness as well? 
Will I survive my final breath 
or live to see my certain death? 
I ask the glaring pools of black 
inside my mirror, staring back 
and then I hear that Death once more 
rapping softly at my door. 
When opened, I see a thousand ways 
that I might meet my end of days 
but in this form, no ugliness 
upon the face of my obsess. 
Just gratefulness for what I have, 
this bittersweet becomes a salve 
to mend a heart which takes for granted 
each breath which should leave me enchanted 
and then I bid a soft farewell 
that I might contemplate this well. 
Why this shade would come to me 
then force my darkened eyes to see 
the futility of hanging on 
to a life forgotten when its gone? 
This lesson learned, left me a wish 
that I might finally cherish 
and sorrow for each day that’s past 
yet live each moment like my last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 10/29/2015 5:39:00 AM
This is very well done, Ramon. "glaring pools of black, inside my mirror staring back" great imagery of the depth of his sadness. Also, "grateful for... the bittersweet becomes a salve to mend a heart..." kudos!
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Date: 10/29/2015 5:57:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate the comments and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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