Solace

Crushing snowberry bushes on a hillside,
Droops down, discarding fallen blossom petals,
magnificent sand dunes soaked in pure water,
countryside nature soothes with the sweetness of honeyed melody,
And down to the beat.

A stream that appears as blue beads,
Draws the surroundings light,
Pretending a strange miracle,
Sometimes it hides, sometimes the stream shakes out,
Screams for people to hear,
Make sense to the floras too,
Hey! I am very happy, This is great!

Grinds at a point,
In another place,
loud and shivering,
No matter how much these things are,
Immediately unmoved,
The journey goes on and on,
It travels as long as it meets the place called the ocean somewhere,
As soon as they meet,  donates whole water resource to the vivid ocean.

Rocks crash and give birth to sweet water bubbles,
There is ecstatic happiness in those bubbles,
 Says, while walking on the plains,
 Hey!!! I'm so bored going on like this,
However, the journey continues,
Nevertheless sometimes,
scared stiff  because people walk on the banks,
But accepts sadness and happiness in moderation.

Quenching the thirst of the people,
The precious thing called aqua is worn like a charm,
It preserves its cycle preserves,
The splendid appearance even awakens wonderful visions in man,
Being like a winsome astonishing and pretty fem-me,
The nature of this journey is similar to the life of a peculiar lady,
Like a railway line...a mind-blowing blue resource on the surface,
To the world, she is a channel carrying water,
But an artistic depiction,
pointed out as a river.

One day under a starry sky,
While standing among the rocks,
While near a forest,
While under the caves,
I hear her whispering,
Bringing a beautiful message to this world,
It is a doctrine for nature,
Is an authenticity,
Something eternal that does not die.

Shrieked thunderously,
Sensitive as if shaking the whole world.

Hey! Someday we all have an end,
It's comforting,
In the right way,
With  the noble reality,
With Overcoming challenges,
As long as you walk with the truth and finish.

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Date: 2/19/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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Date: 2/20/2023 4:40:00 AM
Thank you very much...may you also be blessed in this universe
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