Soggy Cigarettes

Had a dream last night, you could say it was wet Fell headlong in a pool while playing the clarinet Kept playing underwater Received much applausers Got out, and in my pocket was some soggy cigarettes © Jack Ellison 2015
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Eastman Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Mighty dreams you must beget... If fine Tim finds them on the internet... Yep! YouTube is aglow with Jacks playing's of intellect... And with melodies in retrospect we will never forget... Grandpa Troll says that when you're on a roll... keep the dream melodies coming into the infinite...
Smith Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 8:25 AM
I saw it on YouTube you sure we're a hit ...especially that underwater playing bit...the ladies did swoon....when you played that tune.....you're the master, fine Jack, I do admit..... Good morning Jackson
Ellison Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 8:33 AM
WOW! Your best one yet! Move over Beethoven!!!
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