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Softening the Haze

To watch the early nightfall peep, as I Relish the scent of air passing nearby, While verdant grassland breathes of newborn hay Unwinding the busy haze of Friday; The ripple of homespun hours wafts and then A dappled sky folds plates undone, Till softened kisses moist a wheezing breeze Jealous the stars eavesdrop, of love’s caprice On resting arms, like trellis in a shade Blue robins tweet and daffodils parade, As warm caresses glaze lamplights, wherein Solace from our dreamy eyes lulls Friday’s spin. Suz-D's Let's Be Open Contest by nette onclaud

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Date: 10/31/2013 12:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win friend Nette..this is a great poem. LOVE IT!! cheers!!
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Date: 10/30/2013 1:15:00 PM
Nette, . Love the win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/30/2013 2:44:00 AM
Images of hope and rest! Congrats, Nette! Aja, Pinoy! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:55:00 PM
you did good... congrats...PD
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Date: 10/29/2013 2:35:00 PM
I love the stars eavesdropping....!!! Too many wonderful lines to mention...simply gorgeous!! Congrats on a well deserved win!
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Date: 6/29/2013 10:47:00 AM
It's a nice creation of Nature's hidden magic. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:00:00 PM
Such talent you have Nette. A creation of beauty. Nature at its healing best. Beat wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/27/2013 3:32:00 PM
This is such a wonderful poem. You have talent, that's for sure. :)
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:41:00 AM
Another mesmerizing, atmospheric set of feelings. I'm all for Friday calm. This was excellent!
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:55:00 PM
Personally i lovd how u tuned it with friday. Caprice love eh. A lovely fab poem under d sky.
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Date: 6/26/2013 8:54:00 PM
Nette, you have fulfilled my deepest desires with this amazing write! She would be mine, that which you speak of within this delightful poem! I really enjoyed reading this incredible piece this evening! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/26/2013 8:36:00 PM
This poem appeals to my country taste! So often have I seen or heard or wished to be in this very place, relaxing at the end of day with the song of nature about me. Awesome wording too! I also with to thank you very very much for your latest comment. Here's a hug back!
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Date: 6/26/2013 2:17:00 PM
hmm not sure what's happening here but it sure does sound pretty! Light & Love
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Date: 6/26/2013 11:57:00 AM
Very passionate one that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..A little softer style in this one..Thanks for stopping by..A change of style can be a shock sometimes..I hope that you enjoyed reading the different approach..Sara
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Date: 6/26/2013 11:25:00 AM
A whirlpool of images painted with majestic words that leave the reader spellbound! 7! Thank you!
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:18:00 AM
Love the innocence of two enjoying days end. daver
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:15:00 AM
These beautiful images flow so gentle and soften not only the haze but even the heart..Lovely
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