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Softening Emotion

walking on eggshells floating in the stream whispering babbles caressing upon earth faraway eyes in the mist sparkles beautiful heart and soul flowing to inner depths reflecting in the deepest beauty silent words so loving within as the emerald ocean swells mirror upon one's heart greeting the stream flowing so amazingly rising in waves fall outwards to you an amazing woman opening the envelope a treasure within the chest a pirates bounty the king's ransom lighting up smiling it;s you

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Date: 9/1/2013 5:05:00 PM
I think you are one of the best romantic poets on this site! Your talent for poetry is a rare treasure that many only dream of finding within themselves..... This reminded me of my poem titled, "I Want To Be Yours", please, read it sometime. And, thank you for commenting kindly on my poem, "Broken Wings". Much appreciated!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 5:19:00 PM
ever so sorry i posted the wrong comment in your box you are gifted in writing in so many ways do not forget that thank you for the amazing comment deeply appreciated
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 5:13:00 PM
you sparkle beautiful in your new picture but the holding the canvas painting outwards from the heart i will write for you a sparkling gem as you dazzle me in your beauty a lady thank you heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/1/2013 4:46:00 PM
Liam..You keep the reader coming to read and asking what s next?Your words are like a painting bleeding on the canvas of blissful heavens..Very romantic..soft and beautiful..almost a whisper : )
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 5:15:00 PM
you sparkle beautiful in your new picture but the holding the canvas painting outwards from the heart i will write for you a sparkling gem as you dazzle me in your beauty a lady thank you heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/1/2013 12:19:00 PM
- Ohhh ... thank you for this beautiful gem, Liam! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 3:10:00 PM
THE PLEASURE IS THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/1/2013 12:08:00 PM
Hey Liam, A treasure of a romantic write my friend.. Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 3:11:00 PM
MY OLD FRIEND THANK YOU FOR THE SPARKLING DIAMOND COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

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