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Softening Emotion

walking on eggshells
floating in the stream
whispering babbles
caressing 
upon earth

faraway eyes
in the mist
sparkles beautiful
heart and soul
flowing to
inner depths

reflecting 
in the deepest beauty
silent words
so loving 
within

as the emerald ocean swells
mirror upon one's heart
greeting the stream
flowing so amazingly
rising in waves
fall outwards
to you

an amazing woman
opening the envelope
a treasure
within 
the chest

a pirates bounty
the king's ransom
lighting up
smiling
it;s you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/1/2013 5:05:00 PM
I think you are one of the best romantic poets on this site! Your talent for poetry is a rare treasure that many only dream of finding within themselves..... This reminded me of my poem titled, "I Want To Be Yours", please, read it sometime. And, thank you for commenting kindly on my poem, "Broken Wings". Much appreciated!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 5:19:00 PM
ever so sorry i posted the wrong comment in your box you are gifted in writing in so many ways do not forget that thank you for the amazing comment deeply appreciated
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 5:13:00 PM
you sparkle beautiful in your new picture but the holding the canvas painting outwards from the heart i will write for you a sparkling gem as you dazzle me in your beauty a lady thank you heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/1/2013 4:46:00 PM
Liam..You keep the reader coming to read and asking what s next?Your words are like a painting bleeding on the canvas of blissful heavens..Very romantic..soft and beautiful..almost a whisper : )
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 5:15:00 PM
you sparkle beautiful in your new picture but the holding the canvas painting outwards from the heart i will write for you a sparkling gem as you dazzle me in your beauty a lady thank you heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/1/2013 12:19:00 PM
- Ohhh ... thank you for this beautiful gem, Liam! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 3:10:00 PM
THE PLEASURE IS THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/1/2013 12:08:00 PM
Hey Liam, A treasure of a romantic write my friend.. Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 3:11:00 PM
MY OLD FRIEND THANK YOU FOR THE SPARKLING DIAMOND COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

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