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Softened attention Why would we dispose fragrance of a rose, uplifting spirit, judging not merit? Yet it is clinging, to echoes singing meanings we infuse, as of our heart's muse. Memory recall stifles the bliss squall, since we interfere with love sparks that spear. Though with feet on ground, as free soul unbound, each pulse we cognise sans the urge to size. Rapture all the time, with bliss currents rhyme, which we celebrate, in monk-mode sedate. Gratitude oozes without excuses, as we so entwine, with bliss beats divine. Grace fortuitous, yet continuous, signals we're a mist, casing to resist. Dance within our form, takes us by the storm; nodes with joy gyrate ~ we collaborate. Our vaporised self sings hymns to itself, one with That oneness, in staid gentleness. This world of space-time, is where gongs love's chime, throbbing day and night, for our soul's delight. 06-July-2022

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Date: 7/6/2022 2:15:00 AM
This ebbs and flows in a terrific way "Dance within our form, takes us by the storm; nodes with joy gyrate ~ we collaborate."
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Date: 7/6/2022 7:33:00 PM
Thanks Caren! I like the Jueju poetry form

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