Audrey Haick Poet Free verse

Soft Wind

Soft wind, warm and weightless 
That brushes my cheeks in cool of day
And on warm moonlit nights of summer 
Let me lay upon your expansive wings
Let me breathe deeply of your spirit
Carry me o’er God’s beautiful earth
Carry me across the turquoise seas
Where silence lies supreme as dolphins play 
Listen as their bodies slice the oceans deep 
As the sun seems to linger enjoying the view
Let me down for a while to walk bare feet upon warm sands
Let me frolic with gentle white crested waves, then
Carry me far beyond blue heaven’s dome
Carry me to my Fathers’ home

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J Hamilton Gist November 8, 2016 at 2:07 PM On angel's wings we whisk towards Paradise...lovely work.

Kathleen Kroll October 22, 2016 at 3:56 PM I love the serenity this poem evokes. I can feel myself walking in this nirvana with you. Look forward to reading many more of your poems.

Candace Hodges October 21, 2016 at 1:03 AM I love this poem! It sounds so peaceful and it is beautifully written. It makes me want to walk bare foot on the beach, look out at the water and admire the sun lit sky.this is so lovely.

Deirdre Omaidin January 24, 2011 at 4:46 AM A beautiful piece of writing here, very well done. Déirdre ó Maidin

Diamond Poetry January 21, 2011 at 6:22 PM Wow! Thankyou so much for referring me to your poem! The deapth of the words are amazing! Im looking forward to ready more of your poetry! Love Maree

Christopher Marcum January 20, 2011 at 12:54 PM smile -- first i would wish to say that this soft pastels portrait so sweet amid fragrant colours is absolutely beautiful dear as is, the beauty of yourself, and secondly i would also say that, yes, i could definitely see the heavenly angels joyfully carrying your precious soul to forevermores paradisic throne -- this is immaculate amid the breeze of beauty; a fave, just like you -- love, christopher

Sharon Ruebel January 20, 2011 at 11:19 AM Hello Annalise, I traveled with you as I read. This is simply beautiful and a beautiful tribute to your faith. Lovely, just lovely As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire January 20, 2011 at 10:32 AM We will all make the journey to our Father's home one day, Annalise, and I hope it is as beautiful as you describe. I wanted to join you in soaring over the ocean and watching the dolphins play. A beautiful description of the "Soft Wind" that carries us home. Love, Carolyn

Charles Melody Lightning Ink January 20, 2011 at 6:45 AM the poem is too much and should go to my favorite.....

Charles Melody Lightning Ink January 20, 2011 at 6:44 AM oh poetry, slay me slowly........ even a morosed man can be made lighten by this pen art. well done, for i am some one that can be hardly impressed. love, lightning ink.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 20, 2011 at 5:55 AM To my favoites this one goes. This is ~~Magnificent~~ Annalise. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels January 20, 2011 at 5:25 AM Annalise you sketched quite a serene picture with your words.. Stunning write my friend.. Hope your week's been a good one, mine has been very busy.. love Wilma

Michael J. Falotico January 19, 2011 at 2:34 PM Absolutly beautiful poetry.... period.... always Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta January 19, 2011 at 1:20 PM What a soothing picture of bliss, a sanctuary you have pen- for a minute I enjoyed that breeze of soft wind,warm and weightless with this nice alliterative feelings, Annalise