Soft Wind

Soft wind, warm and weightless That brushes my cheeks in cool of day And on warm moonlit nights of summer Let me lay upon your expansive wings Let me breathe deeply of your spirit Carry me o’er God’s beautiful earth Carry me across the turquoise seas Where silence lies supreme as dolphins play Listen as their bodies slice the oceans deep As the sun seems to linger enjoying the view Let me down for a while to walk bare feet upon warm sands Let me frolic with gentle white crested waves, then Carry me far beyond blue heaven’s dome Carry me to my Fathers’ home ~*~

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 11/8/2016 2:07:00 PM

On angel's wings we whisk towards Paradise...lovely work.

Kathleen Kroll

Date: 10/22/2016 3:56:00 PM

I love the serenity this poem evokes. I can feel myself walking in this nirvana with you. Look forward to reading many more of your poems.

Candace Hodges

Date: 10/21/2016 1:03:00 AM

I love this poem! It sounds so peaceful and it is beautifully written. It makes me want to walk bare foot on the beach, look out at the water and admire the sun lit sky.this is so lovely.

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/24/2011 4:46:00 AM

A beautiful piece of writing here, very well done. Déirdre ó Maidin

Diamond Poetry

Date: 1/21/2011 6:22:00 PM

Wow! Thankyou so much for referring me to your poem! The deapth of the words are amazing! Im looking forward to ready more of your poetry! Love Maree

Christopher Marcum

Date: 1/20/2011 12:54:00 PM

smile -- first i would wish to say that this soft pastels portrait so sweet amid fragrant colours is absolutely beautiful dear as is, the beauty of yourself, and secondly i would also say that, yes, i could definitely see the heavenly angels joyfully carrying your precious soul to forevermores paradisic throne -- this is immaculate amid the breeze of beauty; a fave, just like you -- love, christopher

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/20/2011 11:19:00 AM

Hello Annalise, I traveled with you as I read. This is simply beautiful and a beautiful tribute to your faith. Lovely, just lovely As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2011 10:32:00 AM

We will all make the journey to our Father's home one day, Annalise, and I hope it is as beautiful as you describe. I wanted to join you in soaring over the ocean and watching the dolphins play. A beautiful description of the "Soft Wind" that carries us home. Love, Carolyn

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 1/20/2011 6:45:00 AM

the poem is too much and should go to my favorite.....

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 1/20/2011 6:44:00 AM

oh poetry, slay me slowly........ even a morosed man can be made lighten by this pen art. well done, for i am some one that can be hardly impressed. love, lightning ink.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2011 5:55:00 AM

To my favoites this one goes. This is ~~Magnificent~~ Annalise. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/20/2011 5:25:00 AM

Annalise you sketched quite a serene picture with your words.. Stunning write my friend.. Hope your week's been a good one, mine has been very busy.. love Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/19/2011 2:34:00 PM

Absolutly beautiful poetry.... period.... always Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/19/2011 1:20:00 PM

What a soothing picture of bliss, a sanctuary you have pen- for a minute I enjoyed that breeze of soft wind,warm and weightless with this nice alliterative feelings, Annalise