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SOFT SENSUALITY

SOFT SENSUALITY While the waiting is nearing The longing doubly suspenseful Mechanically or tender make it eager of welcome Perhaps hugging and kissing Will never dampen homesickness Everything in the “kubo” is envious Every minute a comfort and intimate Even crickets stop cricketing And eking doors shut up and posts oiled All holes on the walls will have their heydays peeping Can we stop the nectar oozing down? Surely a very hearty and glorious days and nights Like in a store the customer keeps coming back The delights will never end Soft and hard are both sensual Whether the night is romantic Will both of us irresistible Especially with naked truth And never bow out to heavens.
Term: Kubo(Filipino word) means cottage in this poem. Dalila Agtani 9/26/11 Entered in a contest: Sponsor nette onclaud Contest Name SOFT SENSUALITY

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Date: 10/31/2011 1:31:00 PM
* “`Can We Stop The Nectar Oozing Down? * Irresistible * Especially With Naked Truth` * Owww, I Do Not Believe That I Would Ever Wish This * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Dalila * I Find A Soaring Also * Swirling to Be Found * Thank You * For Your Lovely Beauties Sugar Made Com * Romance & Love * What More? * Beautiful Painting * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:11:00 PM
"Soft and hard are both sensual" = my favorite line in this poem chock full of beautiful lines with meaning beyond my comprehension... I bow. Congratulations and write on!~N
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:18:00 PM
Some very interesting images in some of the lines of your sensuous poem! I see congratulations are in order too. Way to go, Dalila! I don't think I knew before that you are from Philipines? My dad married a woman from there many years ago (it was his fourth wife!) I kind of feel sorry for her. My dad is nutso!! Luv, andrea
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congrats Dalila on a wonderful win with fantastic entry of great soft sensual words of great expression of emotions..luv..
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:15:00 PM
What a great win you have here in Nette's "Soft Sensuality" contest, congratulations Dalila. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Dalila
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