Heidi Sands Poet Triolet

Soft Rain

The soft rain is falling
Kissing the fog, drifting by
Distant thunder is calling

The soft rain is falling
The gray clouds are crawling
All around in the sky

The soft rain is falling
Kissing the fog, drifting by

Heidi Sands

3/27/21

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Quoth Theraven April 3, 2021 at 11:38 AM Heidi, Looking for a gentleness in this week-end. And a soft rain to suit my mood. -Richard Heidi Sands April 3, 2021 at 11:42 AM I hope you have a gentle , peaceful weekend. Thank you for your visit. Take care and enjoy :)

JC Brul April 2, 2021 at 5:53 AM So lovely! I love the 2nd and last line: " Kissing the fog, drifting by" Congratulations on your POTD. Heidi Sands April 2, 2021 at 6:06 AM Thank you JCB . I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Jennifer Proxenos April 2, 2021 at 5:29 AM Heidi , what a fantastic write this is, a little delayed in answering due to lots happening in my life ( see please pray with me) Big congratulations on POTD my dear friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Heidi Sands April 2, 2021 at 6:06 AM Ok, I will look at what you mentioned. I appreciate you taking the time here to comment. Thank you Jennifer :)

Smita Kulkarni March 31, 2021 at 2:59 PM Loved it Heidi! Heidi Sands March 31, 2021 at 3:30 PM Great to hear Smita. Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith March 31, 2021 at 8:46 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. You did a wonderful triolet. Have a blessed day and Easter............... Heidi Sands March 31, 2021 at 2:50 PM Thank you very much Paula. I hope you have a nice Easter :)

Ann Gilmour March 30, 2021 at 12:39 PM so beautiful dear Heidi... sending congrats on POTD my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Heidi Sands March 30, 2021 at 12:44 PM So great to see you Ann. Thank you for your kind comment and thoughts. I hope all is well :)

Jeanne Mcgee March 30, 2021 at 7:51 AM I love a triolet and yours is wonderful. Congrats on your POTD. Heidi Sands March 30, 2021 at 8:55 AM Thank you Jeanne. I hope you have a nice day :)

Regina Mcintosh March 30, 2021 at 2:48 AM Lovely verse and vision. God bless you and congrats on POTD. Love, Gina Heidi Sands March 30, 2021 at 5:33 AM Thank you Gina. God Bless you too :)

Gershon Wolf March 29, 2021 at 9:02 PM This is so beautiful and image-laden, without overwhelming the reader with an excess of verbosity. A FAVE for me, Heidi, and congrats on POTD! :) gw Heidi Sands March 30, 2021 at 5:32 AM Hi Gershon. Thank you very much for the kind feedback, congrats and FAV. I hope all is well. :)

L Milton Hankins March 29, 2021 at 8:39 PM Lovely triolet. Nothing quite so poetic as a "soft rain...falling." Loved your poem and congratulations on POTD! Heidi Sands March 30, 2021 at 5:32 AM Thank you very much Milton. I am happy you loved it :)

Brandy Nicole March 29, 2021 at 6:44 PM I love everything about the rain. Let it "kiss the fog" This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Heidi, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy Heidi Sands March 30, 2021 at 5:31 AM Thank you very much Brandy. Hugs :)

John Watt March 29, 2021 at 4:28 PM A very lovely melancholy triplet, Heidi. Congratulations on POTD! Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 4:34 PM Thank you John :)

John Gondolf March 29, 2021 at 3:58 PM This is such beautiful imagery in this triolet, Heidi, congrats on POTD. John Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 4:06 PM Thank you very much John :)

Panagiota Romios March 29, 2021 at 1:53 PM Love it, Heidi. Congratulations Pangie on your POTD Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 2:00 PM Thank you Pangie :)

Sara Kendrick March 29, 2021 at 1:51 PM I like these triolets. You did a great job with this one. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your visit ..Sara Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 2:00 PM Thank you Sara. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Eve Roper March 29, 2021 at 1:51 PM Back with congratulations on POTD. :) Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 1:59 PM Thank you Eve. I appreciate your support :)

Jennifer Fenn March 29, 2021 at 1:36 PM What a beautiful, serene poem! Congrats on POTD! Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 1:37 PM Thank you Jennifer :)

David Mchattie March 29, 2021 at 12:41 PM Well penned my friend. Congrats on POTD. Have a great day. Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 12:59 PM Thank you David :)

Paulette Calasibetta March 29, 2021 at 11:05 AM Hi Heidi, beautiful piece,your imagery delightful! Congratulations on POTD! Take Care, Paulette Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 11:48 AM Thank you Paulette. I appreciate your support :)

Arturo Michael March 29, 2021 at 9:50 AM Just as soft as you...Congratulations Heidi Sands on POTD. All the best. Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 10:10 AM Thank you Arturo :)

Joseph May March 29, 2021 at 8:32 AM Congrats on POTD Heidi, Nicely done Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 8:40 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Daniel Turner March 29, 2021 at 7:12 AM Congratulations on POTD Heidi. I love a soft rain. Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 7:15 AM Hi DT. Great to see you and thank you for your kind comment! I hope all is well :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2021 at 6:55 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 7:10 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you have a nice day. Hugs :)

Constance La France March 29, 2021 at 5:58 AM Heidi, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with your lovely poem, well done - Constance Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 6:38 AM Thank you very much Constance :)

Beryl Edmonds March 29, 2021 at 5:25 AM A lovely Triolet Heidi, congratulations on poem of the day ~ Belle Heidi Sands March 29, 2021 at 6:37 AM Thank you very much Belle :)

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