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Soft Rain

The soft rain is falling
Kissing the fog, drifting by
Distant thunder is calling

The soft rain is falling
The gray clouds are crawling
All around in the sky

The soft rain is falling
Kissing the fog, drifting by

Heidi Sands

3/27/21

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2021

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Quoth Theraven Date: 4/3/2021 11:38:00 AM Heidi, Looking for a gentleness in this week-end. And a soft rain to suit my mood. -Richard Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/3/2021 11:42:00 AM I hope you have a gentle , peaceful weekend. Thank you for your visit. Take care and enjoy :)

JCB Brul Date: 4/2/2021 5:53:00 AM So lovely! I love the 2nd and last line: " Kissing the fog, drifting by" Congratulations on your POTD. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/2/2021 6:06:00 AM Thank you JCB . I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/2/2021 5:29:00 AM Heidi , what a fantastic write this is, a little delayed in answering due to lots happening in my life ( see please pray with me) Big congratulations on POTD my dear friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/2/2021 6:06:00 AM Ok, I will look at what you mentioned. I appreciate you taking the time here to comment. Thank you Jennifer :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 4/2/2021 12:48:00 AM Lovely Heidi, Congratulations on your POTD! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/2/2021 6:05:00 AM Thank you Sandy :)

Smita Kulkarni Date: 3/31/2021 2:59:00 PM Loved it Heidi! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/31/2021 3:30:00 PM Great to hear Smita. Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/31/2021 8:46:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. You did a wonderful triolet. Have a blessed day and Easter............... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/31/2021 2:50:00 PM Thank you very much Paula. I hope you have a nice Easter :)

Ann Gilmour Date: 3/30/2021 12:39:00 PM so beautiful dear Heidi... sending congrats on POTD my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2021 12:44:00 PM So great to see you Ann. Thank you for your kind comment and thoughts. I hope all is well :)

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 3/30/2021 7:51:00 AM I love a triolet and yours is wonderful. Congrats on your POTD. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2021 8:55:00 AM Thank you Jeanne. I hope you have a nice day :)

Regina Mcintosh Date: 3/30/2021 2:48:00 AM Lovely verse and vision. God bless you and congrats on POTD. Love, Gina Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2021 5:33:00 AM Thank you Gina. God Bless you too :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/29/2021 9:02:00 PM This is so beautiful and image-laden, without overwhelming the reader with an excess of verbosity. A FAVE for me, Heidi, and congrats on POTD! :) gw Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2021 5:32:00 AM Hi Gershon. Thank you very much for the kind feedback, congrats and FAV. I hope all is well. :)

L Milton Hankins Date: 3/29/2021 8:39:00 PM Lovely triolet. Nothing quite so poetic as a "soft rain...falling." Loved your poem and congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2021 5:32:00 AM Thank you very much Milton. I am happy you loved it :)

Brandy Nicole Date: 3/29/2021 6:44:00 PM I love everything about the rain. Let it "kiss the fog" This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Heidi, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2021 5:31:00 AM Thank you very much Brandy. Hugs :)

John Watt Date: 3/29/2021 4:28:00 PM A very lovely melancholy triplet, Heidi. Congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 4:34:00 PM Thank you John :)

John Gondolf Date: 3/29/2021 3:58:00 PM This is such beautiful imagery in this triolet, Heidi, congrats on POTD. John Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 4:06:00 PM Thank you very much John :)

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/29/2021 1:53:00 PM Love it, Heidi. Congratulations Pangie on your POTD Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 2:00:00 PM Thank you Pangie :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/29/2021 1:51:00 PM I like these triolets. You did a great job with this one. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your visit ..Sara Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 2:00:00 PM Thank you Sara. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Eve Roper Date: 3/29/2021 1:51:00 PM Back with congratulations on POTD. :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 1:59:00 PM Thank you Eve. I appreciate your support :)

Jennifer Fenn Date: 3/29/2021 1:36:00 PM What a beautiful, serene poem! Congrats on POTD! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 1:37:00 PM Thank you Jennifer :)

David Mchattie Date: 3/29/2021 12:41:00 PM Well penned my friend. Congrats on POTD. Have a great day. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 12:59:00 PM Thank you David :)

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 3/29/2021 11:05:00 AM Hi Heidi, beautiful piece,your imagery delightful! Congratulations on POTD! Take Care, Paulette Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 11:48:00 AM Thank you Paulette. I appreciate your support :)

Arturo Michael Date: 3/29/2021 9:50:00 AM Just as soft as you...Congratulations Heidi Sands on POTD. All the best. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 10:10:00 AM Thank you Arturo :)

Joseph May Date: 3/29/2021 8:32:00 AM Congrats on POTD Heidi, Nicely done Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 8:40:00 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Daniel Turner Date: 3/29/2021 7:12:00 AM Congratulations on POTD Heidi. I love a soft rain. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 7:15:00 AM Hi DT. Great to see you and thank you for your kind comment! I hope all is well :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/29/2021 6:55:00 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 7:10:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you have a nice day. Hugs :)

Constance La France Date: 3/29/2021 5:58:00 AM Heidi, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with your lovely poem, well done - Constance Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/29/2021 6:38:00 AM Thank you very much Constance :)

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