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Soft Night Songs

Soft Night Songs Crickets welcome night Dew clings to my fading dreams Aesop’s fables live 10/18/10 9:53pm

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Date: 11/16/2010 5:53:00 AM
What a powerful image that second verse, but then the poet is powerful too.
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Date: 11/4/2010 10:42:00 PM
Soft and lovely as a whisper!
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:25:00 PM
sorry, james.. "john" was probably written as my nephew has both names.. thanks!
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:20:00 PM
What a lyrical piece weaving magic of myth and music, james... beautiful phrasing, john and thank you for passing by to leave generous comments on my pages.. warmest, nette
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:18:00 AM
Glad that I chose this one..Enjoyed..Those crickets are still singing here..It won't be much longer before there tune will be silenced..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:41:00 PM
Indeed....the softness sings in the night with the sound of the crickets. Nicely done, James!!
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Date: 10/19/2010 1:15:00 PM
Very well written Jimbo and am hearing these sounds right now.. this could be a great entry for sounds and smells contest luv.. good luck if u enter it ..
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:29:00 AM
Really a beautiful senryu. Food for thought with the fading dreams and Aesop's fables. Great work!
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:51:00 AM
Lovely senryu James, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:18:00 AM
Very creative and yet very inspirational write, james
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:40:00 AM
Very, very sweet/bittersweet senryu, Jimbo. Hope all is going well for you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/18/2010 9:31:00 PM
beautiful senryu James, love it
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