Soft Night Songs

Soft Night Songs


Crickets welcome night
Dew clings to my fading dreams
Aesop’s fables live



10/18/10
9:53pm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 5:53 AM
What a powerful image that second verse, but then the poet is powerful too.
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 10:42 PM
Soft and lovely as a whisper!
Onclaud Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 6:25 PM
sorry, james.. "john" was probably written as my nephew has both names.. thanks!
Onclaud Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 6:20 PM
What a lyrical piece weaving magic of myth and music, james... beautiful phrasing, john and thank you for passing by to leave generous comments on my pages.. warmest, nette
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Glad that I chose this one..Enjoyed..Those crickets are still singing here..It won't be much longer before there tune will be silenced..Sara
Richards Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:41 PM
Indeed....the softness sings in the night with the sound of the crickets. Nicely done, James!!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Very well written Jimbo and am hearing these sounds right now.. this could be a great entry for sounds and smells contest luv.. good luck if u enter it ..
Locksley Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Really a beautiful senryu. Food for thought with the fading dreams and Aesop's fables. Great work!
A   Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Lovely senryu James, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
Mehta Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Very creative and yet very inspirational write, james
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Very, very sweet/bittersweet senryu, Jimbo. Hope all is going well for you. Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 9:31 PM
beautiful senryu James, love it
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