Soft Murmurings

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Like an avian roosting when his cawing has spilled,
I mourn in grief as this shadowed night grows cold
Crushed and grieving from promises unfulfilled
Sorrow burgeons my heart, in bitterness enfold
like unspun wool on a distaff or a poem not quilled

I am overwhelmed with fear; somberly weeping
beneath my rowan tree. In dour thoughts, I dwell
Wisps of silver moonlight cross the sky, sweeping,
signaling hope in darkness, as if it were a death knell
In my den, I feel protected; sanctuary of safe-keeping

My troubled eyes are in search of benevolence anew
For faith and courage instead of such dismal dread
How I long to take flight, trading grey skies for blue
to locate a paradise where happiness can be spread
sharing a drink of wassail; fruited ale of sweet brew

I shall swiftly soar among shining stars at great height
Fluttering my wings on journeyed path of poetic volition
Never again to be lost and alone on any mawkish night
No shadows holding me in their melancholy perdition
for I've learned how to ignite flames of lambent light

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Date: 3/11/2024 12:54:00 PM
Enjoyed very much, Lin! What lovely drinks to share, physical and metaphors!
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Date: 3/11/2024 2:34:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know, Kim. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/11/2024 8:45:00 AM
Dearest Lin, What a heartfelt portrayal of sorrow, longing, resilience, and hope. Your poetic language beautifully captures the depths of emotion, from grief and bitterness to the yearning for solace and happiness. The imagery of the moonlight and sanctuary offers a sense of comfort amidst the darkness. Lin, this is a testament to the power of perseverance and the pursuit of light in the face of adversity. - Loved It! - Blessings, Daniel
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2024 10:14:00 AM
You always 'get' it, Daniel. There are times when your reviews are better written than the poetry unveils my thoughts.
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