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Soft Hazy Full Moon

soft hazy full moon
flirts with the reticent sun
the lustful rays leave
the pale pearl of night ascends
kissing the darkening pines

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:11:00 PM

I already read this one DG... thought I'd pass by it again.. it is a wonderful poem...pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2012 1:42:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's "176" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2012 12:27:00 AM

CG, congratulations In Brian's CONTEST,, XOX, ;-) PD

Kash Poet

Date: 5/13/2012 1:32:00 PM

Beautiful imagery here Debi.Congrats on your win.Honoured to share the top spot with you.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/13/2012 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations. Enjoyed the flirting.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 5/13/2012 9:33:00 AM

My big congratulations on your win, Debbie! This Tanka bring out the magnificent poetess in you...you have a very romantic heart ! Have a wonderful Mother's day. Thanks for your comments...they are always appreciated. Peace & Love, Andrew.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/13/2012 12:31:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Debbie! Congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May

Date: 5/12/2012 5:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win..

David Williams

Date: 5/12/2012 4:04:00 PM

Debbie congrats on your win, excellent lines..David

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/12/2012 11:12:00 AM

A beautiful poem... Terry

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 5/12/2012 10:28:00 AM

Beautiful piece,Debbie.Fine imagery and nice description of nature...Congrats on your well deserved win....

Shani Fassbender

Date: 7/19/2011 2:41:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Debbie!

Shani Fassbender

Date: 7/19/2011 2:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Debbie!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/18/2011 9:37:00 PM

Beautiful image Debbie. Many congrats on thissuper win.

Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2011 10:58:00 AM

I knew I would see this at the top of the winners circle, Deb. Many congrats on your super win. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 10:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie in the contest. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2011 12:50:00 PM

A poem with an education...Congrats on your win..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/17/2011 9:11:00 AM

congrats on a great win, five lines of perfection...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2011 9:38:00 PM

I find the final 2 lines to be SPLENDID. Congrats on your splendid win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2011 9:26:00 PM

congrats Debbie on a great win with soft hazy full moon ..so beautiful luv..enjoy..

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/16/2011 9:04:00 PM

Debbie congrats on your second place win in the contest, and your extra informative info

Judy Ball

Date: 7/16/2011 6:54:00 AM

Ooohh Really nice scene you paint here my friend. Loved this. God Bless, JB

Judy Ball

Date: 7/15/2011 10:53:00 AM

Beautiful. This gives me a lovely vision of the night which I love. Its so peaceful to walk my dogs late at night. God Bless, JB

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/14/2011 4:59:00 PM

Thanks for your comments and enjoyed!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2011 5:49:00 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Debbie. I have enjoyed reading your fascinating writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

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