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Soft Hazy Full Moon

soft hazy full moon
flirts with the reticent sun
the lustful rays leave
the pale pearl of night ascends
kissing the darkening pines

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:11 PM

I already read this one DG... thought I'd pass by it again.. it is a wonderful poem...pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 17, 2012 at 1:42 PM

A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's "176" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

May 16, 2012 at 12:27 AM

CG, congratulations In Brian's CONTEST,, XOX, ;-) PD

Kash Poet

May 13, 2012 at 1:32 PM

Beautiful imagery here Debi.Congrats on your win.Honoured to share the top spot with you.

Joann Grisetti

May 13, 2012 at 12:07 PM

Congratulations. Enjoyed the flirting.

Andrew Crisci

May 13, 2012 at 9:33 AM

My big congratulations on your win, Debbie! This Tanka bring out the magnificent poetess in you...you have a very romantic heart ! Have a wonderful Mother's day. Thanks for your comments...they are always appreciated. Peace & Love, Andrew.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

May 13, 2012 at 12:31 AM

Beautiful imagery, Debbie! Congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May

May 12, 2012 at 5:54 PM

Congrats on your win..

David Williams

May 12, 2012 at 4:04 PM

Debbie congrats on your win, excellent lines..David

Terry O'Leary

May 12, 2012 at 11:12 AM

A beautiful poem... Terry

Olusegun Arowolo

May 12, 2012 at 10:28 AM

Beautiful piece,Debbie.Fine imagery and nice description of nature...Congrats on your well deserved win....

Shani Fassbender

July 19, 2011 at 2:41 PM

Congrats on your win, Debbie!

Shani Fassbender

July 19, 2011 at 2:40 PM

Congrats on your win, Debbie!

Tahera Mannan

July 18, 2011 at 9:37 PM

Beautiful image Debbie. Many congrats on thissuper win.

Elaine George

July 18, 2011 at 10:58 AM

I knew I would see this at the top of the winners circle, Deb. Many congrats on your super win. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2011 at 10:03 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie in the contest. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

July 17, 2011 at 12:50 PM

A poem with an education...Congrats on your win..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

July 17, 2011 at 9:11 AM

congrats on a great win, five lines of perfection...

Andrea Dietrich

July 16, 2011 at 9:38 PM

I find the final 2 lines to be SPLENDID. Congrats on your splendid win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 16, 2011 at 9:26 PM

congrats Debbie on a great win with soft hazy full moon ..so beautiful luv..enjoy..

Francine Roberts

July 16, 2011 at 9:04 PM

Debbie congrats on your second place win in the contest, and your extra informative info

Judy Ball

July 16, 2011 at 6:54 AM

Ooohh Really nice scene you paint here my friend. Loved this. God Bless, JB

Judy Ball

July 15, 2011 at 10:53 AM

Beautiful. This gives me a lovely vision of the night which I love. Its so peaceful to walk my dogs late at night. God Bless, JB

Doris Culverhouse

July 14, 2011 at 4:59 PM

Thanks for your comments and enjoyed!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 13, 2011 at 5:49 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Debbie. I have enjoyed reading your fascinating writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

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