Soft, Gentle

soft, gentle breezes replace air-conditioner's wheezes ~ paradise

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/11/2021 12:40:00 PM

We are at school with no air this afternoon; this is not one I needed to read. UGH!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/10/2021 11:27:00 AM

Well said! I live in "paradise", but you must live where there are no neighbours nor landscapers with blowers . . . ..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/10/2021 4:07:00 PM

Ha, ha! Wish I did live somewhere far from those infernal landscapers. They sure do know how to make noise! :) gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/9/2021 7:03:00 PM

Ah, that they do! Nice.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/9/2021 9:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Milt... I lump air conditioners together with lawn mowers, motorboats, pinging smartphones and other annoyances of our electro-mechanical existence. Mr. Luddite