Susan Mills Poet Personification

Soft Caresses Sit On No Evil Stars

soft caresses sit on no evil stars
gently fall down like electric guitar rain
rhythmic motion of rainlike caresses
             beat to a drum
rhythmic motion of rainlike caresses
gently fall down like electric guitar rain
soft caresses sit on no evil stars

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James Fraser July 17, 2010 at 2:03 PM When ones closes ones eyes and listens to the rain, it takes you to places where the sane always reigns. To take you away from natures rains that falls, it's unjust and wrong and you lose it's en-thrall. Wonderful poetry Susan >> James

Sara Kendrick July 16, 2010 at 2:26 PM Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Different presentation....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 16, 2010 at 12:18 PM Lovely lines Susan .. and a wonderful comparison too.. rainlike caresses always work for me.. enjoyed a very creative write.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire July 16, 2010 at 10:55 AM I like the kyrielle flavor of this poem, Susan. Very nice work! Love, Carolyn