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Soft Caresses Sit On No Evil Stars

soft caresses sit on no evil stars gently fall down like electric guitar rain rhythmic motion of rainlike caresses beat to a drum rhythmic motion of rainlike caresses gently fall down like electric guitar rain soft caresses sit on no evil stars

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James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2010 2:03:00 PM

When ones closes ones eyes and listens to the rain, it takes you to places where the sane always reigns. To take you away from natures rains that falls, it's unjust and wrong and you lose it's en-thrall. Wonderful poetry Susan >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2010 2:26:00 PM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Different presentation....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2010 12:18:00 PM

Lovely lines Susan .. and a wonderful comparison too.. rainlike caresses always work for me.. enjoyed a very creative write.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/16/2010 10:55:00 AM

I like the kyrielle flavor of this poem, Susan. Very nice work! Love, Carolyn