Soft are the Sea-Sand Promises

Along the feathered edge, a red sun-sets
To bind the evening in dreams eyes explore
Two hearts will greet, till' paradise begets
Love leaves impressions as waves swirl to shore
These caps of white will churn warmly the sand
The world will pass, the change of light is missed
Lonely eyes search for their yearning dreamland
When lips taste fire in a hungry kiss
As night arrives to shelter silhouettes
Soft is the sea to these two souls afar
In a twilight's pulse when the tide resets
And hands hold tight to await the Daystar
The fate of these lovers sealed in evermore
Tomorrow's memory from the seashore


9/3/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sands Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 6:31 PM
Oh, this is very nice Frederic! I see it earned POTD as well. Congratulations! :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:28 PM
Hello Fredrick, this poem is very picturesque. Well done.Have a nice day my friend.
One Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 7:02 AM
As always a great sonnet.. Congrats on POTd..
Ashley Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 6:23 PM
The exquisite beauty of your sonnet leave me breathless, Frederic. Such stunning and haunting poetry. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 2:51 AM
gorgeous gorgeous sonnet Frederic you really are a master at this form whilst I struggle and much prefer to write limericks but each to their own. Love this gem, into my faves and congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Bateman Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Hello Frederic, An extraordinary sonnet here for sure, and an instant FAVE in my book!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Lindley Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Now this is an awesome sonnet! Every verse glowing and singing. Congratulations on this gem being chosen as POTD my friend.. A most well deserved honor.. A fav...
Yvonne Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Just brilliant. I’m not on here very much anymore but as poem of the day it came to my email. I’ve always loved your poetry. This is an easy fav for me. Love & Blessings.
Nicole Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 5:35 PM
"Soft is the sea to these two souls afar" Simply beautiful. Breathing moments curl around your words of love. Congratulations Frederic, on poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 2:53 PM
A beautifully descriptive sonnet that has enchanted me with dreamy thoughts of love! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD Frederic! Outstanding!
Messina Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 10:42 AM
A beautiful sonnet, Frederic. Congrats on your well deserved POTD.
Wanter Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 9:45 AM
"Soft is the Sea" is a wonderful concept surrounding lovers. The picture and music are perfect! Congratulations!!
Warrior Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Congrats!!! on your POTD! my friend...beautiful sonnet Frederic...love & light...^WW^
Doll Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Such a wonderful sonnet and so well done! Congratulations on POTD, Frederic.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Breathtakingly gorgeous piece Frederick, congratulations on POTD! xomo :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 3:16 PM
off, suspended in poetic animation... so beautiful is your sea, frederic...huggs
Duet Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 1:37 PM
This is so beautiful, Frederic. I just love it. And, the music was absolutely enchanting. FAVED too.
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