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"Let yourself become living poetry." Rumi Soft whispers of those early summer's breeze Touches my wrinkled skin, caresses so fine. This fleeting moment in time's tranquil ease In your soft embrace let me entwine Feel the petals of pink rose, like lamb's ear. Soft hues upon each bud slowly opens to the sun. In their fragility tenderness appears Peaceful, wanting to be touched_ touch someone. Soft melodies dancing upon the air. A soothing love song that calms one's soul. Find comfort in gentle notes, find solace there. Birds' and bees' symphony that makes me whole_ Softness surrounds you and I in nature. Each soft, peaceful moment, nothing greater

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Silent One

Date: 3/10/2024 11:19:00 AM

Hi Sara, is this the poem you wanted me to read? I love the tender feel to the sonnet, which rhymes and flows so well...It have lovely imagery too..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/10/2024 11:51:00 AM

SO, LOL, I have no idea. totally forgotten. Age and memory problems. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind review of my work. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/1/2024 5:56:00 AM

Much enjoyed the whispers of summer breeze and soft melodies you convey, Sara. A joyful read.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2024 8:09:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I am glad that it was a joy. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 3/1/2024 5:27:00 AM

Lovely dear Sara. This is one of your recent best. The soft and soothing feel nature gives is so rejuvenating. Soft melodies will definitely calm our mind. This sonnet of great beauty, l am sure is going to earn for you a great win. All the best...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2024 5:40:00 AM

Valsa, thank you for dropping by and taking time to comment on my work. It is not for the contest. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/29/2024 4:46:00 PM

What a delightful, soft Sonnet and fabulous contest entry! Your imagery is 'delicious' (Feel the petals of pink rose, like lamb's ear.) I liked the last 2-line ending...I agree. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2024 5:16:00 AM

Oh, Sara B. I have not entered this one in the contest. That word just caught my attention and I wanted to write a poem. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Josefina Costales

Date: 2/29/2024 4:20:00 PM

Every stanza has a soft feeling, one can be lulled to a peaceful and calm sleep. Lovely sonnet - I like the birds and bees symphony making one whole. (like creating a person?)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2024 5:15:00 AM

Yes, a persona created. Thanks for the visit, Josefina. Your comments lifed my spirits. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 2/29/2024 2:52:00 PM

Blissfully calming sonnet Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2024 5:14:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. I appreciate the visit. Sara K