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Soft

"Let yourself become living poetry." Rumi

Soft whispers of those early summer's breeze Touches my wrinkled skin, caresses so fine. This fleeting moment in time's tranquil ease In your soft embrace let me entwine Feel the petals of pink rose, like lamb's ear. Soft hues upon each bud slowly opens to the sun. In their fragility tenderness appears Peaceful, wanting to be touched_ touch someone. Soft melodies dancing upon the air. A soothing love song that calms one's soul. Find comfort in gentle notes, find solace there. Birds' and bees' symphony that makes me whole_ Softness surrounds you and I in nature. Each soft, peaceful moment, nothing greater
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March 10, 2024 at 11:19 AM
Hi Sara, is this the poem you wanted me to read? I love the tender feel to the sonnet, which rhymes and flows so well...It have lovely imagery too..
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March 10, 2024 at 11:51 AM
SO, LOL, I have no idea. totally forgotten. Age and memory problems. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind review of my work. Sara K
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March 1, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Much enjoyed the whispers of summer breeze and soft melodies you convey, Sara. A joyful read.
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March 1, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I am glad that it was a joy. Sara K
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March 1, 2024 at 5:27 AM
Lovely dear Sara. This is one of your recent best. The soft and soothing feel nature gives is so rejuvenating. Soft melodies will definitely calm our mind. This sonnet of great beauty, l am sure is going to earn for you a great win. All the best...
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Valsa, thank you for dropping by and taking time to comment on my work. It is not for the contest. Sara K
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February 29, 2024 at 4:20 PM
Every stanza has a soft feeling, one can be lulled to a peaceful and calm sleep. Lovely sonnet - I like the birds and bees symphony making one whole. (like creating a person?)
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March 1, 2024 at 5:15 AM
Yes, a persona created. Thanks for the visit, Josefina. Your comments lifed my spirits. Sara K
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