Society's Pomp

Often, people think themselves as objects like remodeled decor hyped for exhibition... they wear glittered masks and live in the affirmation of others through false pride, consumed by society's materialistic demands. I notice pretentious vogue glossed with aging skin : and when compelled to be like them— ballroom furniture and power- hungry clowns-- I awaken my inner child, lithesome and more excited at star-gazing than imitating worldly, rusted pomp. .................... Ir0nic ZiNk 's What Is Society Contest 9/28/2016

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Date: 10/20/2016 8:11:00 AM
Well said, Nette! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 10/2/2016 3:58:00 PM
You never disappoint,,,,, regardless of the subject,.... This is a winner Nette !! YOU awaken my inner child, lithesome and more excited at star-gazing than imitating worldly, rusted pomp. Congratulations as a winner in my eyes!
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Date: 10/2/2016 3:54:00 PM
Double congrats sweet Nette! You rock! :)-luloo
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Date: 10/2/2016 2:01:00 PM
You show up artificiality and materialistic demands for what they truly are, Nette! Society needs to take a good honest look at itself! ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/29/2016 9:40:00 PM
Wonderful, Nette, congratulations on Poem of the Day Hugs
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Date: 9/29/2016 2:52:00 PM
Congrats on your P.O.T.W. selection. A sharp reflection on today's society, well done.
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:11:00 PM
Hi nette: Great provocative poem on the human condition.
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Date: 9/29/2016 11:55:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2016 11:51:00 AM
thanks all dear soupers for the sweet congrats... i didn't know of this POTD feature till i got your messages... huggs!
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Date: 9/29/2016 9:20:00 AM
Back to say congratulations Nette, on POTD. Well deserved.
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Date: 9/29/2016 9:08:00 AM
Hi Nette, This is a good take on the theme. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/29/2016 7:25:00 AM
many congrats on POTD a great take on the theme Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2016 1:47:00 AM
Great last two lines, Nette:) congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 9/28/2016 9:08:00 AM
Love your thoughts, they seemingly echo mine and are delivered creatively and intelligently. I am absorbing the fact that just 5 minutes ago I finished my entry, went to post, and poof - contest filled and gone. I didn't make it, so now, as a Libra, I must decide to post or not to post sans contest! Will 'write' soon, I would not forget Nette ... Hugs, CayCay
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Date: 9/28/2016 7:39:00 AM
sweet Nette-love your take on this contest- there could be such a wide variety of ideas for this contest-loved this and good luck! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/28/2016 2:29:00 AM
Well done! Enjoyed your take on society. I'm sure many will have your back on this. Regards, Craig
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:21:00 PM
I feel the same way about it myself! So much truth here, nette. Every line has noteworthy substance. Just an excellent write.
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:12:00 PM
Very nicely penned Nette
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Date: 9/27/2016 3:37:00 PM
It doesn't get much better than this. An excellent write. A fav for me!
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Date: 9/27/2016 3:36:00 PM
Very nice write !
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Date: 9/27/2016 2:22:00 PM
Not enough Botox in the world to hide rusted pomp...Good luck in the contest Nette...
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Date: 9/27/2016 1:38:00 PM
Societal farce I see on a daily basis; makes me wonder where we are going. Astounding poem from your fluid pen!
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Date: 9/27/2016 12:49:00 PM
Very true, Nette. An antidote to pretentiousness should be taken at least once a day. Barry.
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