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Societal Tendencies

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Societal Tendencies

Word paint this uncanny illusion, fluid in state of mass confusion Product line of numb minded sheep, in fear of difference, holding doubt in reverence. Minds and feet now anchored deep, having slid the slippery slope steep unto worn road of indifference. Like sweeping sand with silicon grains seen as dunes in desolation deserts one and few dare dream molding disparate unique specks in wondrous betterment
Date: September 24, 2016 Poetry Contest: Three Style II Sponsor: Laura Loo Syllables: checked via howmanysyllables.com Rules: - 1 new poem on any theme using these three forms: - In this exact order (the couplet and 2nd stanza do not have to share same rhyme scheme, my letters below are used as a guide) 1. One couplet : A-A 2. One stanza with rhyme scheme: A-B-B-A-A-B 3. One sedoka: syllable count: 5-7-7-5-7-7 (no rhyme scheme)

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Date: 10/23/2016 2:36:00 AM
dear Richard , this is wonderful write:) Congratulations on your sweet win!//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:27:00 PM
Very good, Richard, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:54:00 AM
loved this Richard! fully deserving of a top spot :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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Date: 10/22/2016 2:05:00 PM
thank you Luloo!! Both for the contest and my highest placement in a contest to date =) Richard